*** Poem by Dislocated Heart

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Rating: 2.8


I remember that one time,
I was walking by,
nearly dropped my phone,
as you called in the line.
I picked up in panick,
just to hear what you would say..
with a smile inside,
you told me you loved me..
and missed me today.

Everytime you say that,
it brings a big smile to my face.
I knew, you and I felt the same way.
you might think you love me more,
but I kno I love you just as much.

I wish I could see the twinkle in your eyes..
the way you smiled,
when you opened up the box that night.

I'd never trade this feeling for anything in the world.
You're the one I love, & The only one I wanna be with in this world.

no other girl in the world,
could ever take your place.
You'll always be in my heart..
Thats where you'll stay.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
*Trusting You* 18 December 2008

this is really good I liked it a lot. you put good images into this. good job. Crystal

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Amanda Dailey 15 December 2008

Hello justin aka Dislocated Heart, i really enjoy this poem its refeashing and sweet -amanda

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Sathyanarayana M V S 15 December 2008

Very refreshing, lovely poem. Rather got power to connect hearts

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Allysyn Bryant 13 December 2008

Is that a promise?

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