Justin Reamer

Freshman - 967 Points (2 October 1993 / Holland, Michigan)

½ - Poem by Justin Reamer

I am a fool in this world, he said,
Not knowin’ where I’m goin’,
Travellin’ down tah nowhere.
I’m all alone in the world,
Ain’t got nobody to share my bed,
Ain’t got nobody to hold my hand,
I don’t got a woman.

Big Jim shook his head and said,
Trouble with you, sir,
Is you ain’t got a head.
You is half-stupid, half-deaf and dumb.
You don’t pay attention to nothin’,
So ya end up hurtin’ yoself in the end.

Georgie said, Then what do I do,
To get a woman, Big Jim?
I ain’t got no clue.
I feel so alone,
So sad and so down.
What the hell am I to do?

Big Jim responded,
Well, whatcha gotta do is
Clean yoself up,
Look nice,
Get a nice disposition,
Set your attitude straight,
Take a woman by the hand,
Share your money,
Share your love,
And share your bed.

Comments about ½ by Justin Reamer

  • Gold Star - 9,259 Points Geetha Jayakumar (7/11/2013 7:28:00 AM)

    Good write......Well written. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, July 4, 2013

Poem Edited: Thursday, July 4, 2013

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