Nick Kasparie

Rookie - 22 Points [T. F. B.] (3-30-94 / Quincy, IL.)

Comments about Nick Kasparie

  • Rookie - 14 Points Sue Ann Simar (7/9/2013 4:37:00 PM)

    I read about a half dozen poems and found they moved easily, the rhymes did not seem forced. However, the content seems reined in by the rhyme. I wonder if you've ever tried to follow the rhythm of the language, and not the rhyme...perhaps to see if the content takes you further?

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Relief to know these things that grow,
Unconscious worries that come and go,
Will soon subside and fear abide
To rules they’ve made about suicide

Hope: it flows, it ebbs and grows
The day of light and dark of night
Coincide at once in me
The frightful dangers soon will flee

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