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Alisha A.
Alisha A. Texas / United States, Female, 18
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  • POEM: Three Little Words by Alisha Alphonse (11/28/2013 1:05:00 AM)

    Thank you all for your support!

  • POEM: Pristine Love by Khairul Ahsan (10/18/2013 10:37:00 AM)

    This is one of the most touching poems I have ever read. Simply remarkable. Personally for me, I can relate very, very much to this poem it is amazing in every way imaginable. My favorite part has to be:

    She seeks a hand to hold and wants hers as well be held,
    In secluded privacy, from the outside world as if shelled.
    She wants to love and be loved, to touch and be touched,
    Promises never to leave the hand that she fondly clutched.

    That is exactly how I was feeling last night. This is the first time I have read a poem that describes my situation. Good luck on the semi-finals! For me, you did Excellently! ;)

  • POEM: Crazy Poem by isabella velazco (9/19/2013 5:22:00 PM)

    Isabella, I'm going to be honest. This would not be considered a poem at all. It does not make sense whatsoever. And I have to point out, Cassandra and Jacquelyn are not bullying you at all. They are giving you their honest opinion. That is what this site is about it. Study how poetry is supposed to be formed and learn how to make your poems make sense. If your poems does not make any sense then no one will like them.

    All the best, Alisha A.

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