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  • Pratikxa Sedhain (8/15/2013 7:05:00 AM) Post reply

    Hello everyone.
    My name is Pratikshya and I am a 16 year old, aspiring poet. Please could you take some time to view my poems and leave a comment.
    I really appreciate any feedback; good or bad.
    I'd love to be the best poet I can be.

    The link to my poems is - http://www.poemhunter.com/pratikshya-sedhain/

    Thanks in advance,
    Pratikshya

  • Pratikxa Sedhain (8/11/2013 7:41:00 AM) Post reply

    Friend's Character

    My friends read a lot
    morning day and night
    They love each other
    But always ready to fight

    Some are real
    And some are fake
    Always they want
    Is a sweet break.

    Some begin to cry
    In minor jokes
    Some are always happy
    Doing their works

    Some want Nepali
    Some needs Maths
    Some love English
    With crooks and cracks

    [...My friend says...]
    Somewhere in the world
    Lives an angel
    She is always ready to solve tangles....

  • Pratikxa Sedhain (7/11/2013 9:44:00 AM) Post reply

    Togetherness

    If you are heart, I wanna be your beat.
    If you are cake I wanna be your sweet.

    If you are kite I wanna be your flight.
    If you are dream, I wanna be your night.

    If you are guitar, I wanna be your dhun,
    If you are star, I wanna be your moon.

    If you are metal, I wanna be your shine,
    If you are poem, I wanna be your rhyme.

    If you are paddy, I wanna be your hay,
    If you are light, I wanna be your ray.

    If you are rain, I wanna be your moist,
    If you are lover, I wanna be your choice.
    pratikshya sedhain

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