very nice and descriptive and like all ur poems this one has an amazing flow keep penning and thanks for sharing
very good dear Hira poetry is all about imagination and word play and u did both well. the phrase shine and tarnish is quite clear so doesn't need to be explained.keep writing.
very nice poem about poem, crafted with care and the flow is just like the gentle breeze of the westward wind in a summer eve. very good write