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Vizard Dhawan
Vizard Dhawan Samastipur, Bihar / India, Male, 18
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Engineering aspirant
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FIITJEE Bokaro/ Chinmaya Vidalaya, Bokaro
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Vizard Dhawan's last comments on poems and poets

  • (7/4/2014 1:26:00 AM)

    twisted and sweet curry

    BRAVO....! ! !

  • (7/4/2014 1:23:00 AM)

    just great and awesome words are there...!

    Excellent|||

  • POEM: INKED by JENIE FRANKSAY (7/2/2014 9:57:00 PM)

    praiseworthy piece of art
    keep writing

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Vizard Dhawan's comments on forums

  • Vizard Dhawan (8/19/2013 12:16:00 AM) Post reply

    the page from where you check your manage your comments or submit a new poem there an additional icon of read colour would be enlisted
    thanx

  • Vizard Dhawan (8/18/2013 3:19:00 PM) Post reply | Read 1 reply

    ONION UNION

    once it so happened
    potato was going to wed
    with a lady's finger
    invited band and singer

    sweet potato came early
    he was excited madly
    then came the brinjal green
    wrapped in the cloth with sheen

    chief guests were cauliflowers
    who came to blessed the lovers
    party was orgainsed by ground
    then came tomato red and round

    everyone was enjoying tea
    then their came a group of pea
    they began playing all around
    then came the ugly bitter ground

    carrot and radish came late
    as they had to wash the plate
    music was high and kinky
    shocking entered zuchini

    then came their enemy
    with a union
    at last made the blast
    the wily onion

  • Vizard Dhawan (8/18/2013 3:16:00 PM) Post reply

    sure, why not

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