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Søren Valentine
Søren Valentine The City of Tombs / New Zealand, Male, 19
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About Me : I like to write. Simple. My life is rather interesting. Uhm... I have trust issues but lets not get into that. Your welcome. Im very symbolic and I loooooooovvvvvveeeee ... more »

Søren Valentine's last comments on poems and poets

  • POEM: How many times have i counted the stars by Nathan Barkley (3/24/2014 9:41:00 PM)

    Oi mate this is really good! I like the picture of counting the stars, they are special to me.

    Also, I absolutely love the imagery of flower petals floating ever so gently on a river of pain knowing that is isn't gentle at all. Every ripple that petal causes will bring so much back, and like you mentioned, those petals come back later on.

    I really liked this!

  • POEM: And melt into nothingness by Nathan Barkley (3/24/2014 9:36:00 PM)

    Hmm. This poem is very good. It is only the second one I've read and I already know you are a great writer. Therefore, you have much potential.

    I'll probably find the answer to this enquiry as I read on, but have you tried writing without rhyming? I think you'd be good at it. But what do I know?

    Thanks for sharing.

    Sorry if I seem too abrasive. I'm just honest... not to cause offence.

    Anyway, sigues escribiendo!

    þakka þér!

  • POEM: Graffiti by Aria Siren (3/10/2014 10:49:00 PM)

    ... must you torture us so? Brilliant, simply brilliant.

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Søren Valentine's comments on forums

  • Søren Valentine (11/27/2012 5:19:00 PM) Post reply

    Hello :) ,
    I've just posted some poems I wrote recently that I would love to get some different opinions on. Thanks in advance!

  • Søren Valentine (11/1/2012 11:13:00 PM) Post reply

    Hi,
    I would love for you guys to read my new poem
    The Unraveling

    and my poems entitled " Fallen Raven" and " Autumnal Love"

    Thanks in advance for your time!

    P.S. If you leave comments (which I hope you do, I want to get different opinions on my poetry) PLEASE be completely honest. If you didn't like it, tell me!
    That's why I want different opinions :)

  • Søren Valentine (11/1/2012 11:08:00 PM) Post reply

    Hello Everyone,

    I'm not exactly new to this site. but I am new to much of its features, (I don't get on the computer much)
    anyhow, I would very much appreciate some of your thoughts on my poems, your views, interpretations and opinions.

    And please don't hold back your thoughts or try to " spare my feelings" as others have in the past. I'm a very straight forward person and I like to hear (or read) people's honest opinions, specially on my poetry. Anyway, thanks so much for your time!

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