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Dominic Hunt Blue mountains / Australia, Male, 47
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  • Dominic Hunt (8/27/2012 3:57:00 PM) Post reply

    You are the sun
    You bring hope after the darkness of night
    Light up my days with new beginnings
    Hold me in your rays of warmth
    You are the wind
    Changeable always
    You blow strong and weak
    Surprising day to day
    You are the rain
    I need you to grow
    Yet dampen my spirits
    Nourishing, devastating
    You are the ocean
    Mysterious, deep
    Tidal is your nature
    Endless waves of emotion you bring
    You are the tempest
    Making me feel alive
    Exhilarating, scary
    Life on the edge
    You are the moon
    Waxing and waning
    Peaceful, beautiful
    A wonder to me
    You are the mountains
    Formidable, grand
    Standing before you
    Entranced by your immensity
    You are the snow
    Softly you fall about
    Each part is different
    Pure and driven
    You are the trees
    Shading me from hurts
    Shedding again and again
    Offering hope anew
    You are the flowers
    Bright, cheerful
    Many colors
    Change with the seasons
    You are the mystery
    Never revealing all
    Keeping parts hidden
    Holding me spellbound

  • Dominic Hunt (8/17/2012 12:48:00 AM) Post reply | Read 1 reply

    hi
    i love feedback on my poems and i appreciate good or bad comments.
    i guess i am the same as others on this site and just want to get better


    regards Dom

  • Dominic Hunt (7/24/2012 5:26:00 AM) Post reply | Read 1 reply

    You are always there
    Even though you are gone
    Whispers in my mind
    Saying things never said 
    I don't want to hear your voice
    But it follows me
    Like a drum softly beating
    It is a rhythm of my life
    I don't want to see your face
    But as I close my eyes 
    It's there
    Still beautiful but painful
    It only brings sorrow now
    Even your smile
    Like sunshine
    Clouds my day 
    Dreams are nightmares
    For there is no escape
    You are dancing
     On the fringes of my mind
    I wake to find you
    Far away I drift
    Day or night
    There is no place to hide
    You are always there

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