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Dash Black
Dash Black Johannesburg / Malawi, Male, 25
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Aspiring Writer

Dash Black's last comments on poems and poets

  • POEM: Everyday Bread by Vijay Sai (6/20/2014 5:27:00 AM)

    Quite a good picture of poverty of folks in the slums. nice wright man

  • POEM: At The Moment by Shashikant Nishant Sharma (5/12/2014 1:21:00 PM)

    i love this poem...made it my favorite long time ago. A five star poem

  • POEM: Prince Charming by Khairul Ahsan (5/9/2014 3:26:00 PM)

    Actually i was trying to re-emphasize your point on how people do put their focus on truvial things when falling in love instead of being satisfied by love alone just like the prince charming in your poem presents himself; with nothing but love. i hope that helps clarify my point abit.

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Dash Black's comments on forums

  • Dash Black (1/23/2014 2:15:00 PM) Post reply

    Dash Black is back with new poems well struck....check out the stuck in the new pack! Love y'all! As from one poet to another!

  • Dash Black (9/19/2013 12:51:00 PM) Post reply

    That's really a good line from a legendary actor.

  • Dash Black (9/19/2013 12:44:00 PM) Post reply

    I'm an amateur too in that regard but i believe a if you would let it flow and let the editing later decide what goes or what stays. I would also advice you to look at the works of the best writers you adore and see how they capture such creative occurrences. For example how JK Lowling managed to intrigue us with her magical world without losing a touch of logic for once.
    I'm also penning my first ever manuscript at the moment. :) lol

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