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  • POEM: The Afterlife by Karen GonzalezVidela (1/10/2014 6:50:00 PM)

    Dear Karen

    I watch you reap
    the seeds you keep
    within your heart
    you make a garden grow
    at the rythms of your flow
    the fear boxed in
    its crying sin
    but listen closely to the sounds
    those ears can really hear
    from a far or from so near
    it's clear to me
    the love you poor
    into your poetry
    the afterlife is everywhere
    it's here and there
    it's in the stars
    and mothers' love
    it's from the hope
    that from the dove
    will freedom cope
    cries out to set us free
    a dense immensity
    immense intensity
    the blood which streams
    all through your soul
    it can and will and shall
    interconnect us all
    hold on and stride
    please do not hide
    what's in your eyes
    look straight at them
    against the gleam
    caress yourself
    and hold on to your dream
    and say you can
    surprise us still and above all
    yourself you will.
    and
    greetings from a little elf!

    Madrason

  • POEM: I Searched You by ramesh rai (10/13/2013 6:00:00 AM)

    Hope Searched

    God in this
    Universe
    I urge you
    to please send
    Notification
    and too respect
    our feedback
    hear my call
    might fall
    for i am left
    in disillusion
    please don't dress
    me with neglect
    or in confusion
    if i offer
    unto You
    my All!


    greetz

    Madrason for Ramesh': I searched you.

    13102013 (what's in a number?)

  • POEM: I Searched You by ramesh rai (10/13/2013 5:42:00 AM)

    Hello Ramesh

    You could also say


    Hope

    God in this
    Universe
    I urge you
    to please send
    Notification
    and too respect
    our feedback
    for i am left
    in disillusion
    please don't dress
    me with
    neglect
    if i offer
    my all!




    greetz

    Madrason

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