In a lot of your poetry, your very pessimestic! I'd like to see you write, about happy occasions. Surely there are some good things, you can recall that would make it interesting, for the reader. It's a start, but look up and not, down! ! It takes time, but I'm betting you'll come up, with a good piece of work, real soon.
Thank you Alan, for your critique on my poem, Whatever The Reason. Now, after reading this poem of yours, it was done very beautifully and I commend you, for what you did and respect you, for your courage.10+