Maddi Eden

Maddi Eden Poems

The label on your jeans
The sheen of your complexion
The length of your nails
Superficial
...

The golden sunlight, on your bed in the morning.
Yawning and stretching in the warm tawny sun
Like a contented purring cat.
...

When I see your face
See your smile
See your love
For someone else
...

The only knowledge worth having
Is the joy of looking
Upon a freshly frosted field
Before seeing your own crunched impressions
...

I know it.
You know it.

My hair is - average.
...

6.

On an iced December morning, so faded that it could be
Grey, but if you squint you see
...

7.

Eat, sleep, talk, laugh
Unseeingly, in a trance.
Sigh, think, feel, move
...

When you look at me
What is it that you see?
The answer is: whatever I'm standing in front of.
...

She stands, so still, so poised
Hears their voices - wait!
Don't make a sound.
...

Left All Alone
And No One Cares
Left All Alone
It's Just Me and My Prayers
...

Your writing
Makes me smile
It's just
So lovely
...

The sweat on our backs
The blood in our veins
The beat of our hearts.
Pointless, eternal.
...

Hushed whispers
Of my elders
What are they talking about?
...

everyone knows what i'm talking about.
when your stomach flips, inside.
come on, don't pretend you don't know.
...

I hope it hurts you -

my hate, dripping from my mouth.
Gushing from my pores
...

Such a fool! how stupid I am -
To fall in love from a distance.

Such a fool! how stupid I am -
...

When I think about it
Long and hard
Logically
I think that I’m crazy to stay with you.
...

I saw you
You didn't see me
I know that that's the way
It's always going to be.
...

19.

Everything will decay
Almost like a mockery, because
It's here today
It won't be for long.
...

20.

It's 1.06 am here
In Manhattan.

My feet are cold, I wonder
...

Maddi Eden Biography

About Me: ♥ My name is Maddi Eden ♥ I'm twenty six and work in journalism. ♥ Poetry is a secret vice of mine. I never published a poem and I never will. It's for fun and more importantly personal realisation. ♥ Most of my poems are about love, because it is the most easily accessible emotive subject. There are hundreds of thoughts about love in everyone's mind (try reading 'That Hollyword Word') . ♥ I write two types of poem: a trashy song style which satisfies my low-brow urges (look at 'My Destiny' and 'Eternity'.) They're poor poetry. ♥ The type of poem I prefer to write is deeper. ♥ If you're just getting into my work, let me recommend a few favourites: ♥ DECAY ♥ FIRST BLOOD ♥ I SAW YOU (a little trashy, but I like it) ♥ INVISIBLE (it's the most empathetic of my poems) . ♥ RIDICULOUS. This is actually very true. ♥ THAT CHIPPED PAINT'S LOOKIN' BEAUTIFUL is my favourite poem. It's short and sweet with nice imagery. ♥ THAT HOLLYWORD WORD, an outcry against the cliched nature of the word LOVE. ♥ And LISTENING is sad and poignant, at least, I think so.

Please give me as much feedback as possible on my poems. I do ask that if you read them, you rate them and preferably comment (if you give me 5/10 I like to know why) . Always open to constructive criticism.

Thank you, and I hope you enjoy my poetry. I know I do.)

The Best Poem Of Maddi Eden

Superficial

The label on your jeans
The sheen of your complexion
The length of your nails
Superficial

The watch on your wrist
The necklace at your throat
The brand of powder on your cheeks
Superficial

The colour of your eyes
The size of your house
The number of friends you have
Superficial; and don't you forget it.

Maddi Eden Comments

Shanker Jwala 11 July 2006

thanks for your comments.i like u & your beautiful comments.u r a great poet i know which i see your poems. u r so cute girl i like it. your skill is too much. i am student of poem. i didnt have study english language. so english language is difficult to me. if u teach me i will grateful to u. hannah, please help me to teaching me ok? bye hannah. nice to meet u.

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