I think your poem are good. Looking forward to reading more from you. Just because your man don't mean you don't have feelings. it's great that you can express them here through your poems. Good luck in the army. Good luck where ever life may take you. Keep writing.
It is hard to name the one who caused your pain because i'm the one to blam you have nothing to gain if you stay with me theres a world you could be with a different friend who will stay till the end but why wont you leave