I think your poem are good. Looking forward to reading more from you. Just because your man don't mean you don't have feelings. it's great that you can express them here through your poems. Good luck in the army. Good luck where ever life may take you. Keep writing.
Why Won't You Leave
Why wont you leave when will you believe that I don't care for you that's why I said we're through
you don't seem to realize the fire burning in my eyes why don't you see the scar you gave to me