I think your poem are good. Looking forward to reading more from you. Just because your man don't mean you don't have feelings. it's great that you can express them here through your poems. Good luck in the army. Good luck where ever life may take you. Keep writing.
Its Just Highschool
Everyone goes through this years of life that you'll miss The time of your life to make friends The time were goodbye means it ends
Im talking about highschool were you're popular or uncool you have your first times even your first crimes