I did like Flood of Blood. I can see a lot of time and effort went into a really well crafted poem. So glad that when you originally tore your first poem into a million pieces you didn't give up. your are becoming a true poet with great imagination and and style.
Together We Can
Your powers and mine Shall together unite To observe the sunshine And see the day light
United we stand Confidently on land Yet, divided we fall Into the deepest hole