Graham Leese (2/13/2005 4:24:00 PM)
I find your work overrated while a few of you poems leave a standing statement, i think you should perhaps try writing a few poems that get to the point sharper with interesting imagery
Just trying to help
Graham |
Herbert Nehrlich (1/23/2005 7:28:00 AM)
No, of course, you WOULDN'T get it.
No one should never (your words) ...travel such limited miles with far less passengers....(your words again) ...
Wow, almost poetry, shame about the English.
H |
Michael Witkowski (1/21/2005 8:50:00 AM)
One last thing - you've never given me advice- bet it is because you cannot stand a fellow German - you had to flee Germany for whatever reason - i surmise it's sore spot in your life - and now that you- on reading my short bio- saw that i am born in Poland - your typical old age German anti-Polish racism has been pricked & stung out of its unholy restles sleep |
Michael Witkowski (1/21/2005 8:37:00 AM)
Dr H
You are not a published poet but lewd-lecherous and arrogant.
Above all you have racist sentiments Germans had about Poland before World War Two and some still have,
So climb off your high horse
I bet your doctor title is a fake too |
Kim McInnis (1/17/2005 8:28:00 PM)
I wanted to thank you for your comment. I was pretty upset for a couple days, but I thought a lot about what you said, and you're right - it's not fair to the many talented poets on here that I can pass off thoughtless scribbles as works of art. I thank you for your honesty and hope you don't give up on me yet - I need the criticism to grow.
To comment on your own work, I'll be truthful and say I haven't been through all of it - a nearly impossible feat in a mere couple of days - but from what I've seen, not a word of your glowing reviews is untrue. The praise of a sixteen-year-old probably isn't worth a penny to you, but I do mean it. Your wit and honesty is refreshing.
Respectfully,
Kimberly |
Amberlee Carter (1/14/2005 1:05:00 PM)
What can I say that hasn't already been said? in one way or another.
It's nice to see some who can write on many different levels, such as writing with a quit wit and clever charm, to writing about love and life in a serious way.
It's a talent, one which most people even so called ' poets' today don't have....I'll be reading your work for a long time to come.
Always,
Amberlee |
Anne Leaver (12/19/2004 6:40:00 PM)
Just a quick note to thank you for your encouragement. Little by little, I look through your work here - I'm awfully glad you're writing, and ths forum is, for me, a wonderful medium for 'publishing' and for collecting the ethos of the aspiring poet world. Let's continue!
Anne |
Darrell Rohling (12/16/2004 9:51:00 PM)
Mr. Nehrlich,
Thank you for the amazing body of work you offer. Clearly, you are a poet's poet. I; ll keep reading, too. And thanks for your own kind words offered to me recently.
djr |
Pradeep Dhavakumar (12/16/2004 12:33:00 PM)
Liked most of your work published over here.Hard to think that your not professional! . |
. . (11/12/2004 12:23:00 AM)
Herbert,
I read all of your poems (finally) and I love them all. Even the one in German. Althought it is off the beaten path of the others.... :) Anyway, I just wanted to applaud you on your amazing talent. Perhaps you could manage to write a poem for the 'lonley hearts club'. Thanks so much for the interesting reads! !
Take Care.... |
