greg richardson

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  • Jefferson Carter Jefferson Carter (5/24/2013 11:03:00 AM)

    Greg, I appreciate what you're trying to do (stripped-down philosophy) but your diction is just too mundane to make the poems interesting. Read someone like Rae Armantrout or Robert Creeley or W.C. Williams to see how this kind of poem is done well. Also, if you're going to use eccentric punctuation, be consistent....

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Ready For Death

Ready for death
she talked
in soothing words
Her faith is strong
Her ideas firm
She comforts her children
and holds them close
A miracle -
this women
tender and sweet
No desolation
in her eyes
that I can see.

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