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  • Rookie - 587 Points Jefferson Carter (5/24/2013 11:03:00 AM)

    Greg, I appreciate what you're trying to do (stripped-down philosophy) but your diction is just too mundane to make the poems interesting. Read someone like Rae Armantrout or Robert Creeley or W.C. Williams to see how this kind of poem is done well. Also, if you're going to use eccentric punctuation, be consistent....

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The Tree of Life

Oh protector
of the tree of life
Can you keep back
the flames
that threaten
our very souls?
I pray you can
and I will assist
We will fight

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