Critiques and Revision
(10/1/2013 4:48:00 PM)
Thank you Diana...I absolutely did want a critique and an honest one too....you are absolutely right in what you said. The poem came to me fairly quickly and late into the night. Wrote it down then worked on it a bit the next day and then did not want too much technique as to spoil the feeling I was trying to express. But you are right in what you said and thank you.....we wont progress with " I liked it very much" type of critiques!
Comment of the Day
- A very well constructed poem with perfect rhyming beautifully written