Critiques and Revision
Edwina Du Casse
(10/21/2013 1:44:00 AM)
Mike Your poem is such truth for many-I know I could relate- I liked the last three lines.reminds me of my poem reflections in a mirror of life, titled 'Youth gone'and shadows.
I liked this work. My pen-name is Poetlife. Blessings.
(10/1/2013 2:47:00 PM)
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I like this, particularly the idea...though the style took some time to get used to....I think that this is because it is neither prose or rhyme, nor does it have a steady metre but I do think if you consider applying some poetic technique, this poem is potentially a really good write and worthwhile read. (I hope you really did want an actual critique) . Diana