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  • Rookie Mohammad Tabatabaei (8/11/2013 9:37:00 AM) Post reply
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    Very beautiful and rhythmic poem.good luck.

  • Rookie Kimmy Hesser (7/26/2013 8:41:00 PM) Post reply

    I really liked this, it made me smile right away :) It's very energetic, a breath of fresh air, well done!

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