Teen Poetry and Discussions
(12/12/2013 12:01:00 AM)
I enjoyed this poem.
The end was the strongest line for me, when you say " She had to go I was told / To make room for a parking space."
I believe you are reflecting humans innate connection to nature, and depict how our society today does not respect and appreciate nature as we should.
Comment of the Day
- A very well constructed poem with perfect rhyming beautifully written