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Katniss Everdeen United Arab Emirates (11/16/2013 3:57:00 AM)

WAITING FOR THE SUN TO RISE

Staring at the dark skies
Waiting for the sun to rise
When will this night end?
When will the dark descend?
Hope is beginning to fade
The shattered bits of dreams, away they wade
All those precious moments have passed
Proving that happiness never lasts
The Sun had set too soon
Leaving behind the dark sky, without a moon
Now the silent tears roll down my cheek
Though they are silent, they are louder than a shriek
I’m dying inside but you cannot see
All the pain is running through me
All I can do is to curse my fate
But I know, for the sun, I’ll have to wait
And I hope to find it some day
And if I ever do, my fears, it will allay.

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  • Fiona Schwartzinoff (12/21/2013 2:58:00 PM) Post reply

    Quite a talent, Katniss! My favorite part is:
    Now the silent tears roll down my cheek
    Though they are silent, they are louder than a shriek
    I’m dying inside but you cannot see
    All the pain is running through me

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