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  • Rookie Nine Vuuren (8/3/2014 12:40:00 PM) Post reply
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    An afrikaans poem me and a friend wrote...
    enjoy if you understand it.

    Hoe het sterre in die lug gekom?

    Hoe het sterre in die lug gekom?
    Dis 'n baie moeilike som...
    Kom ek vertel jou gou.
    Dit was eers die kos van 'n pou

    Dit was ongebore sterre
    tussen blomme gebere.
    Die geheimsinnige blom
    het dit versteek onder sy tong.

    Pou gaan haal sy kos in die suikerbos,
    maar die saadjie laat los.
    Stadig vlieg hy deur die fluitende wind
    en gaan rus soos 'n lint

    Aan die donker ruimte
    aan die buitenste, buite.
    Die kleinste, fynste saadjie was vreeslik bly,
    want hy het ontsnap en is nou vry...

  • Rookie Nine Vuuren (8/3/2014 12:10:00 PM) Post reply

    Sometimes I can be a real poetaster, but I enjoy writing poems, so I keep writing poems.

    My friend wrote this poem:


    You are very boring.
    I just want to keep snoring.
    I want to sleep
    and I won't make a peep.

    What can I do?
    Maybe I can throw a shoe...
    I am so bored
    I can win a reward!

    I want to cry,
    but not fly!
    I want to do something
    it can't be nothing!

    You are very cool,
    so don't make me drool.
    You are like a crook,
    so stop reading that book! !

    I want to play
    don't take my fun away!
    This is the end,
    so goodbye my friend!

  • Rookie - 3 Points Snehanair Manikkath (7/24/2014 12:26:00 PM) Post reply

    relish my poem embellished doll, share it with me, friends

  • Rookie Andile Mthembu (7/19/2014 10:38:00 AM) Post reply

    I am new here... Please check out my new poem 'Stolen heart' _thanx

  • Rookie - 47 Points Marisa Eutsler (6/19/2014 8:26:00 AM) Post reply

    i have resently posted a poem called " Save The Falllen Beauties" please go and read/ comment :) thanks

  • Rookie - 19 Points Keith Sifelani (6/10/2014 4:11:00 PM) Post reply

    Mix a dough of selfishness in a bowl
    Pour in a cupful of vulgar lunguage and bullying,
    Stir carefully.
    Mix two days in dentention
    Wait for four years.
    Serve with a cupfull of tears.

  • Rookie - 47 Points Marisa Eutsler (5/13/2014 8:11:00 AM) Post reply | Read 5 replies

    Peer out my window
    Look out just to see
    Gone has the white snow
    Its finally done chasing me.

    Winter has disappeared
    Sun in the sky
    The bitter cold I much fear
    I wave the icy flakes goodbye.

    The ground is warm
    Now the perfect soil
    Bees buzz and swarm
    My plan no one can foil.

    The grass is green
    Rivers at their flow
    Birds chirping I’ve seen
    Oh so quite does the wind blow.

    Plant all the seeds
    Water them good
    The flowers have their needs
    I smiled where I stood

    For what I looked upon
    Was the most beautiful sight
    Tea whistling at the dawn
    The blooms swaying in delight.

    The heaven that I speak of
    Excepts every single pardon
    As lovely as the dove
    For this is my garden.

    - - - - - - - - - -go to this poem and comment please

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  • Rookie - 0 Points Bob Smith (5/13/2014 12:16:00 AM) Post reply

    A Crowned King

    A single striking figure in the sky
    Abandoned, alone, but flying high

    He lands alone, on a roof that's near
    His daring crow's song rings in my ear

    Defiant, he stands there upon his throne
    He cares not that his friends are done

    In this harsh world he is all but forgotten
    In this harsh world his strength is all too uncommon

    - Please comment-

  • Veteran Poet - 4,237 Points Primrose Tee (5/2/2014 3:41:00 PM) Post reply | Read 1 reply

    in my heart thats where u belong
    with you i feel lyk l own the world
    cause u my world
    nthn else matters
    yours truly
    with love

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  • Rookie - 0 Points ~lovely No One~ (5/2/2014 11:04:00 AM) Post reply

    Lost By ~Lovely No One~

    I have not ever been so lost,
    I know not what to do.
    I use to think that being a child,
    That was the worst thing to be..
    Oh gods, now..
    I know that is not true.
    I was able to run away as a child,

    No, I can't run away.
    I still hear the voice,
    I hear what they call me,
    What they say,
    I don't klnow what to do,
    I really don't. I think,
    That more than ever..

    I need a guided help.
    You use to make me feel so important,
    I wonder, do you remember that?

    This was so long ago,
    It does seem that,
    Time does fly.

    I can't seem to remember if you where even real,
    Please let me know that you were.
    All I want to know,

    How do I make it not hurt?
    All the voice and what they say,
    All the haterd they point towards my way.

    How do I make it stop,
    How do I make them see..

    I am human, and I am...

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