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  • Primrose Tee Rookie - 1st Stage (5/1/2014 5:41:00 PM) Post reply

    its almost exam time for me..gudluck to m n everyone

  • Shriya Sarang Rookie - 1st Stage (4/29/2014 12:17:00 AM) Post reply | Read 1 reply

    Its a assignment given to us, I have to write a poem on nature. Any suggestions.

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  • ~lovely No One~ Rookie - 1st Stage (4/17/2014 11:47:00 AM) Post reply | Read 1 reply

    Death by ~Lovely No One~


    Deaths hands
    As cold as ice
    Sending shivers down my spin
    Death touching me..
    Does he know what he wants?
    Running his hands of ice through my hair
    Telling me things
    I shouldn't believe
    Death..
    His grip so tight
    My heart plusing with pleasure
    Have I lost my mind?
    Death..
    His lips on mine
    Burning me
    Have I crossed the line?

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  • Skitz Meraki Rookie - 1st Stage (4/10/2014 1:12:00 PM) Post reply | Read 3 replies

    Words. So beautiful, so necessary. and yet, they become superfluous. Words flutter and swirl around me like little flurries of snow. Some of them I hate, such as flail, spill, coarse, stinted. I have favorites too. Crimson, melancholy, grotesque, chaos, shiver. Words that are melt-in-your-mouth sweet, and other words, that puncture your tongue with bitterness. Sometimes I don't have the words I need. I write and write and write, but I can't write enough. I wish I could use words like Poe, to paint in the sky with sentences that drip, drip, drip with passionate horror. If only. Instead I sit, writing all my words, my insignificant thoughts, for no one to see. Shall I introduce myself?I am No One of Importance, and I live Somewhere I Don't Belong. I suppose, in a way, I am a ghost.

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    • Herbert Guitang Rookie - 1st Stage (4/27/2014 1:12:00 AM) Post reply

      A very honest and true words from your hunger in poetry. Wonderful

    • Fiona Schwartzinoff Rookie - 1st Stage (4/26/2014 5:08:00 PM) Post reply

      Oh, I loved this. Very good! I congratulate you on your choice of repetition and alliteration. The imagery is also spectacular! Keep it up and you may become better than Poe! :)


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  • Precia Liz Rookie - 1st Stage (4/10/2014 4:35:00 AM) Post reply | Read 1 reply

    with the afternoon sun gaping at me
    the dandelions fluttering around
    they remind me nymphs in a book
    i saw when i was three.

    the inconsistency of my breath
    hooded with the fear of solitude
    each moment i realised
    the freedom they gave.

    i was never a damask rose
    nor a sweet forget me not
    to be loved so dearly
    yet why i craved so much?

    when i close my eyes
    i see a dagger in my heart
    it hurts so much
    yet i cant feel it.

    its tthe dandelion's flair
    now its floriating my hair
    i hear them sing for me
    wish someone could hear it..........

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  • Robinson Fred Rookie - 1st Stage (4/8/2014 5:01:00 AM) Post reply

    Reasons why Aluva will soon become a major residential area

    With more than one major developments progressing in Kochi, the city will soon get listed as one among the best metro cities in the country. This has also contributed extensively to the growth and development of many towns nearby. One among them, and perhaps the most important one, is Aluva, ideally located a few kilometres away from Cochin.

  • Hanna Cox Rookie - 1st Stage (4/3/2014 2:31:00 PM) Post reply

    “Giving In”

    By: Hanna Cox

    You put the blame on me

    but can’t you see,

    in this world full of lies

    you think I’m so shy,

    but I have a lot to say

    about what goes

    on today.


    You say I’m wrong,

    but I know I’m right,

    now I know,

    that I can’t win

    this fight.


    Just believe me,

    just this once

    can’t you see?

    your judgement

    has no effect

    on me,

    you try and hurt me

    even though I plea.



    I’m a flame,

    that can’t be

    put out,

    even when you

    scream and shout.


    Try and pull

    me down,

    and surely

    you will see,

    that your words

    have no effect on me,

    I’m the only

    one who gets

    no credit,

    why don’t you

    get it?


    I try so hard to

    do it right,

    I have these feelings,

    deep within,

    always knowing

    that I can’t win,

    but if I try too hard,

    I’ll always end up

    giving in.

  • Hanna Cox Rookie - 1st Stage (4/3/2014 2:31:00 PM) Post reply | Read 1 reply

    No name
    By Hanna Cox

    You put on a show,
    to hide your
    true feelings.

    You don’t have
    to be on
    their side,
    you have a
    family who
    loves you,
    more than
    you know.

    I know you
    want to end
    it all,
    but you
    have to keep
    standing tall.

    I believe in
    you, I believe
    you can win
    this fight.

    You are stronger
    than you will
    ever know.
    I would write
    a song
    to keep
    you going,
    but my song
    writing skills,
    just aren’t
    flowing.

    So I wrote
    this poem instead,
    so that you
    can stay strong.
    I believe that
    one day you will
    prove them wrong.

    Don’t give up
    on me, please,
    give me
    a sign,
    that you’re
    okay, that you
    can make it
    through the day.

    I know you
    love someone,
    more than
    I will ever know.
    Maybe the case is,
    that you’re afraid
    to let it show.

    I know you’re
    being bullied
    and I know
    that you’re
    depressed,
    and with pills,
    I know that
    you're obsessed.
    You're like
    a bomb
    ticking down and,
    ready to explode.
    Their lies
    you try
    to decode.

    They spread rumors,
    the nasty ones
    that make
    you want
    to die.
    At night
    you cry
    yourself to
    sleep.

    You've fallen in
    too deep.

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    • Fiona Schwartzinoff Rookie - 1st Stage (4/26/2014 5:13:00 PM) Post reply

      How sad...: (I hope this is fiction. BTW, I loved the last sentence. It created a nice effect at the end. :)

  • Kathleen Neff Rookie - 1st Stage (4/2/2014 10:21:00 AM) Post reply

    Hey everyone, it is me Kathleen. I just wanted to say I was sorry for not posting any more poems on here because I have been very busy with two things. One is my book that I am writing and it has taking up a lot of my time and two is district music contest is on the 25th and I have a solo. AAAAHHH! I have everything down in the solo except that I have a serious case of stage fright. I can't sing in front of my school because I know them and it is just to nerve wrecking. My teacher says (these are her words not mine) that I have a beautiful and enchanting voice but I need to let it out. I need to stop being selfish. Um hello I have stage fright, I mean I can sing karaoke in a bar because I don't know the people but hello people who go to my school will be at the contest and I will be going against the best singer in my school. I am doomed! . Love you guys and I love you poem hunter.

    Sincerely Your's truly,
    Kathleen

  • Jack Growden Rookie - 1st Stage (3/28/2014 1:57:00 AM) Post reply

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