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  • Twi$ha $hah (1/23/2014 8:18:00 AM) Post reply

    I want to be with you

    Out of the blue you grab my hand and make me dance with you,
    I think to make this moment more mirthful lets add a mocha to the cue,
    Sharing this moment together,
    Is the best time of my life

    I know you are a living dead
    And The moment we have in between
    Is the only thing I have in my head
    You and I both know that I am just a teen
    But being with you makes me feel as if I am the queen

    I can feel your noticeable absence
    And you, are the only one with whom I would spend my entire life
    Without even reconsidering the thought
    Whenever you are beside me I can feel your fragrance
    I see you coming when the fiery sun sets
    And I loose my patience
    To break the silence
    And I know when you'll leave
    I'll be fallen in the mouth of sadness
    Till then I want to be with you

    I would feel so good
    When I would be reminiscing
    About these days
    If ever I could
    And I surely would

    I hear you sing with your velvety voice,
    I want this memory in the future to be rejoiced
    And I want to be with you forever and ever

    By now you would be thinking that I'm a wise fool
    As I am drooling about the wind
    For you to read
    It would be logically illogical
    But for me it's illogically logical

  • Mawunyo Adjei (1/21/2014 7:59:00 AM) Post reply

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  • David Greene (1/18/2014 11:56:00 PM) Post reply | Read 2 replies

    My raft has gone
    away.
    I’ve no strength left to swim.

    So now I sink
    deep down.
    Perhaps she will return.

    There’s no sunlight
    down here.
    I have drifted too deep.

    All I know here
    is pain.
    And never can I sleep.

    There’s no end to
    this ocean.
    I drown eternally.

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  • Femme Feeble (1/11/2014 11:57:00 PM) Post reply | Read 1 reply

    Remember the thing that happened that I remember but turned out to not be real?
    Oh, that old thing?
    Yeah, I preferred it where it is, thank you very much.

    I have been doing very well ignoring it's existence, so you picking it up again and waving it in my face is just
    Plain
    Old
    Obnoxious and very silly looking. The kids playing on the swings are staring.

    Do you even remember who I am?How I don't like when you crack your knuckles or
    Tap the table or
    Fidget too much or
    Do stupid things like want to love me.

    What if I decided to die? Would you care?



    Not that I am, of course.
    But I am just saying that I would care if you did. And I really don't know what you would do if I



    did.
    I guess I'm the only person in the world without a life so sue me for wanting to spend it with you.
    I was stupid to think that was something that you were in to.
    You have your bands and your Shakespeare and your worldliness and everything that I don't have.

    And maybe I am secretly glad,
    Because I can't live with that much excitement in my life.

    And you are far too aggressive for me anyway.
    And that thing where you are already in a relationship yeah that part oops ha. ha. ha.

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    • Fiona Schwartzinoff (1/19/2014 10:00:00 PM) Post reply

      I like this nonchalance in this poem. :) My favorite part is: I guess I'm the only person in the world without a life so sue me for wanting to spend it with you.

  • Aditya Raman (1/8/2014 12:54:00 PM) Post reply

    Hi all. I'm new here and I wish to share some of my poems that I've written. So now I'm sharing one.Please do drop some Comments & Suggestion. Thank you.

    Deep in a Kiss
    - - - - - - - - - -
    When I kiss,
    I sense the eternal bliss,
    our souls meet,
    through the lips.

    Love the one,
    I be the one.
    You for me,
    I for you.

    One love,
    for me n’ for you.
    One heart for,
    we the two.

    The three words,
    I LOVE YOU,
    not enough to,
    say my love.
    x- - - - - - - - - - - -x

  • Jack Growden (1/6/2014 1:00:00 AM) Post reply

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  • Melissa Robinson (1/5/2014 3:56:00 AM) Post reply | Read 2 replies

    Please give me feedback on this poem.!

    Off the tip of your tongue and from your mouth
    your rancid accusations degrade me.
    I try and push them away and block them out
    from all that I'm contemplating.

    But it's so hard to do with how much I care
    for you and all of our memories..
    Your lack of virtue and your suppressed emotions
    are no excuse for u to hurt me.

    This contention among us lacerates me;
    my hearts made of glass and it's shattering.
    I strive farthest from you but still long for your touch-
    the scent of your skin still remains comforting.

    I've sullenly noticed I am addicted to you,
    your like a drug and I'm finally quitting.
    This time it's for good, you make me sick;
    stay away from me, don't talk to me, don't touch me..

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  • Vikas Rawat (12/27/2013 4:49:00 AM) Post reply | Read 1 reply

    hi friends.... i love creating poems! ! ! ! here is one of my poem for football! ! !
    LIonel Messi
    we all know that he is a real football king
    seeing his game i feel this normal life boring
    he dedicated his life and everything for his game
    even he left his family to get the Fame
    his palms are sweaty
    knees weak but arms are heavy
    he is best in the world he keeps on forgetting
    he looks nervous on his face but he's calm and ready
    oh! when he bomb down the crowd shout so loud
    he want to shut their mouth.
    but the words don't come out
    he is choking how
    on his game nobody is joking now..
    you know his reality
    he goes against gravity
    once he put on barca's jersy
    his name is messi but he shows no mercy
    when he comes opponents deadly plead
    when he goals everyone even the opponents bow their head
    during his play no one can cheat him
    there's no one in this world who can compete him
    for winning he have such a rage
    that he can even with his strength tear the cage
    when he strikes no one can stop him
    cuz he's lightning thunder even no one can plot him! !
    Its the Messiah

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  • Fiona Schwartzinoff (12/19/2013 12:14:00 AM) Post reply | Read 1 reply

    And just because I find this addicting, here's another poem I wrote. Inspired by Wuthering Heights actually! " Even Though The Sun Wasn't Out" .

    I saw two wild hearts in the heather.
    Running, they flew through the grass;
    Dancing, they climbed the shores and cliffs
    To a sea as calm as glass.
    They splashed in the miniature oceans
    Made by heaven’s spout.
    They bathed in sunlight at night time
    Even though the sun wasn’t out.

    Even though the sun wasn’t out
    And the air was wet with dew
    They could see nothing but light and beauty
    In the fantasy land they called true.
    They could see nothing but paradise
    In the windy and dreary day.
    They could see nothing but sunlight
    Even though the sun had gone away.

    Their world was tenuously quiet
    A web vibrating in the breath of the wind.
    Their small feet plunged down the hill
    To a land where angels had been;
    Where the air was clear of all things dark,
    All things to come, truth and doubt.
    And where the sunlight shone everywhere in their eyes –
    Even though the sun wasn't out.

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