Teen Poetry and Discussions
(8/26/2014 6:28:00 AM)
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THE OATH – In a sea of the mind
A lonely bud in a colourful setting,
The world an unknown sea
A view of lost-love
And the old memories
No one is to see
The minds of me
For I am the forgotten
The forgotten memory
A lonely bud in a beautiful world
That has no longer the right to explore
And we all take for granted
That for us it’s an open door.
These pieces of our lives
Those are there for perfected growth
We must take our responsibilities
And to them we make the oath
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(8/25/2014 2:55:00 AM)
Hello Fellow hunters, hope you are all doing great, my latest poem is entitled GOOD MORNING!
please enjoy, and dont forget to leave your personal comment on it...remember to rate it as well........thank you all.
When the night sweeps
Away the last drop of darkness,
And Aurora, with her cold wind,
Gently wakes up from her sleep
And with the help of the sun,
Split light into every corners,
It reminds the nursing mother
Of the child who cried last night,
It strikes the heart of the caring father
Of the unfinished house at the site
And alerts the poet of an unfinished verse
Of a dirge, whose theme is nothing but death.
But isn't it amazing,
How our minds are occupied
By varieties of dreams which are blazing
In every nerve which must surely be achieved.
To me, every morning brings a sad joy,
And I know you want to know how,
It sprinkles fresh hope to the boy
While, slowly, it pushes me to my grave.
As long as I am not ready to bow,
Every morning, is surely a good morning!
John Sky Dadzie
(8/24/2014 5:55:00 AM)
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Hi i think i agree with emmanuel the senior hunters should pay a little more attention to us the younger ones tank u.
Zoila T. Flores
(8/20/2014 7:59:00 PM)
I would say that to write poetry is simple and complicate at the same time. The secret to succeed on it is just to keep going until your mind has jammed.....Or check this beautiful poem named 'THE POESY" By Zoila T. Flores
(8/20/2014 5:48:00 AM)
I am back again fellow hunters...... my new poem is entitled...........ALL BUT DREAMS.....please do read it and comment as well. I would also be glad to receive more personal criticisms from everyone that reads my poems. thank you all and have a good day.(Dont forget to rate it also)
(8/19/2014 3:19:00 PM)
From my thorough readings of some students here and there, I can say that some students are great poets and great poetess. Some students and teens need only to be encouraged and to be helped in different ways.
(8/19/2014 3:18:00 PM)
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From my thorough readings of some students here and there, I can say that some students are great poets and great poetess. Some students and teens need only to be encouraged and to be helped in different ways.Replies for this message:
(8/29/2014 7:40:00 PM)
Sir, there are many young poets who need no encouragement, just gentle guidance. All those who are new to the site should not be afraid to speak to those who have more experience.
(8/20/2014 2:09:00 AM)
Yes my fellow poet....all that we need is encouragement and motivation and we shall excel. Thanks for your concern.
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(8/18/2014 3:07:00 AM)
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Indeed, if adult hunters would pay much attention to teen hunters' poems, they would know that classical poets are abundant here. Goodmorning to all my fellow hunters, have you read my poem SOMEDAY TO COME?check it out, enjoy it, rate and comment on it as well. Thank you all.
(8/17/2014 2:12:00 PM)
There are some really great poets out here. I may be of no standard, but I invite all of you to read my poems and comment. I may not formally introduce myself, for you may come to know me soon.
(8/17/2014 9:05:00 AM)
hello.... check out my new poems. PLEASE dont forget to cooment and rate them as well. My latest poem is entitled, NOT YET TOLD....
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