Teen Poetry and Discussions
(8/19/2014 3:18:00 PM)
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From my thorough readings of some students here and there, I can say that some students are great poets and great poetess. Some students and teens need only to be encouraged and to be helped in different ways.Replies for this message:
(8/29/2014 7:40:00 PM)
Sir, there are many young poets who need no encouragement, just gentle guidance. All those who are new to the site should not be afraid to speak to those who have more experience.
(8/20/2014 2:09:00 AM)
Yes my fellow poet....all that we need is encouragement and motivation and we shall excel. Thanks for your concern.
- John Westlake (8/29/2014 7:40:00 PM) Post reply
(8/18/2014 3:07:00 AM)
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Indeed, if adult hunters would pay much attention to teen hunters' poems, they would know that classical poets are abundant here. Goodmorning to all my fellow hunters, have you read my poem SOMEDAY TO COME?check it out, enjoy it, rate and comment on it as well. Thank you all.
(8/17/2014 2:12:00 PM)
There are some really great poets out here. I may be of no standard, but I invite all of you to read my poems and comment. I may not formally introduce myself, for you may come to know me soon.
(8/17/2014 9:05:00 AM)
hello.... check out my new poems. PLEASE dont forget to cooment and rate them as well. My latest poem is entitled, NOT YET TOLD....
(8/17/2014 4:03:00 AM)
hi guys! Please check out my spoken word below
Let me know what you think! : -) Advice appreciated! ! ! ! !
(8/8/2014 12:34:00 AM)
Out of control
We broke the chains that tied us whole
A fire inside us, it melts our words
Every secret has its own truth
The more we keep it, the more it shows
I'm not saying the words that are right
And you keep doing actions that you hate
The brain collides the beats of the heart
Though it will not pause, more it will not stop
Same question plays when we lie in our bed
Rather to eject it, we load more instead
We can't kill the living pictures in our head
Wake or sleep it stays as we live
But one thing pushes us to the wrong way
It keeps dividing us as we step
We want to look back but we're stiff necked
I have a thousand words to say
It's hard to let go all promises
Have to pretend you are gone and dead
Know you'll do the same thing as i did
(8/3/2014 12:40:00 PM)
An afrikaans poem me and a friend wrote...
enjoy if you understand it.
Hoe het sterre in die lug gekom?
Hoe het sterre in die lug gekom?
Dis 'n baie moeilike som...
Kom ek vertel jou gou.
Dit was eers die kos van 'n pou
Dit was ongebore sterre
tussen blomme gebere.
Die geheimsinnige blom
het dit versteek onder sy tong.
Pou gaan haal sy kos in die suikerbos,
maar die saadjie laat los.
Stadig vlieg hy deur die fluitende wind
en gaan rus soos 'n lint
Aan die donker ruimte
aan die buitenste, buite.
Die kleinste, fynste saadjie was vreeslik bly,
want hy het ontsnap en is nou vry...
(8/3/2014 12:10:00 PM)
Sometimes I can be a real poetaster, but I enjoy writing poems, so I keep writing poems.
My friend wrote this poem:
You are very boring.
I just want to keep snoring.
I want to sleep
and I won't make a peep.
What can I do?
Maybe I can throw a shoe...
I am so bored
I can win a reward!
I want to cry,
but not fly!
I want to do something
it can't be nothing!
You are very cool,
so don't make me drool.
You are like a crook,
so stop reading that book! !
I want to play
don't take my fun away!
This is the end,
so goodbye my friend!
(7/24/2014 12:26:00 PM)
relish my poem embellished doll, share it with me, friends
(7/19/2014 10:38:00 AM)
I am new here... Please check out my new poem 'Stolen heart' _thanx
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