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  • Abekah Emmanuel Freshman - 2nd Stage (9/2/2014 1:28:00 AM) Post reply | Read 1 reply

    Thank you mr.Westlake for your kind response, i am personally grateful for this advice. Indeed we are many here and so one must be smart enough to get the desired attention...I particularly dont mind how many people visit my page but how many people get touched by my message....I want every message of mine to be clear as possible. All the same, thank you. Let me also alert you of my new poem...ACCEPT MINE TOO....this time, a gratitude to the creator. Pleaae read it and comment on it....thank you all...

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    • John Westlake Veteran Poet - 3rd Stage (9/2/2014 4:02:00 PM) Post reply

      Sir. The more poems you read, the more you may get noticed. I will read some of your poems and can inform other members of your work. That's easy enough for me to do. Whether they will read is up ... more

  • Nehemiah Theophylus Haokip Rookie - 1st Stage (8/29/2014 10:37:00 PM) Post reply | Read 1 reply

    Seven fake things of my mom words

    When I was hungry, you gave me your food
    Telling that my ward
    am not hungry yet, serve my food
    for I have ate just before
    and beliving that!
    I feed my ward with hunger and pain
    But one day he will feed me with his strength
    And recollect my tears
    Which has flow down in vain

    When I was in need of cloths
    You gave me a new cloths
    Leaving thoes comment of other
    As you were named as uniform
    Telling me that “my son”
    This is a small gift from your poor mom
    Beliving that someday
    I’ll bloom you with a golden dress
    To cover all her torn choths

    Dear my fellow teen
    pliz think how our mum suffer on us from childhood

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  • Abekah Emmanuel Freshman - 2nd Stage (8/29/2014 5:15:00 AM) Post reply | Read 1 reply

    hello fellow young hunters, it is a pleasure to always meet you here. I hope you are all doing good.... I wish to inform you that i have done a few renovations on my new poem...GOOD MORNING! Please check it out and enjoy. Dont forget to rate and comment. Thank you all!

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  • Frederick James Bradley Moore Rookie - 1st Stage (8/28/2014 8:08:00 PM) Post reply | Read 1 reply


    changing the world
    is never an easy task

    because the minds of man never want to change
    but if you are crazy enough to try
    then others will be crazy eough to follow

    to change the world
    you dont have to be perfect
    all you need is an idea
    worth sharing and worth following

    to change the world
    your heart has to be into it
    you can`t half step what you do
    or everything will fall apart

    change, my friends
    is a great weapon
    one that everyman fears
    and some seek to avoid
    so beware that not everyone
    will change with you
    they are the lost ones

    to change the world
    you must be wise enough
    to hold your tongue
    and bear your arms

    to change the world
    you must be wise enough
    to speak of peace
    and surrender for your cause

    if you change the world in anyway
    you will be persecuted
    because man always fears
    anything he cant understand

    to change the world
    you need a foundation behind you
    that will encourage you to keep pushing the world
    when your broken and exausted

    to change the world
    your first step has to be yourself
    because you are the greatest catalyst for change
    and the greatest challenge to tradtion

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  • Hannah Bryson- Price Rookie - 1st Stage (8/28/2014 5:02:00 PM) Post reply | Read 1 reply

    Hey guys, I'm a bit new to Poem Hunter and I would love it if anyone would read my poems. I would greatly appreciate feedback or constructive criticism. [They are pretty much the same thing but you get the idea.]

    Thank you!

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    • John Westlake Veteran Poet - 3rd Stage (8/28/2014 7:07:00 PM) Post reply

      Your name is on my list of poets that I need to read. I will (given time) read ALL of your poems and comment on as many as I can. I give my word on that. Profanisaurus

  • Aimee Woolford Rookie - 1st Stage (8/26/2014 6:28:00 AM) Post reply | Read 1 reply

    THE OATH – In a sea of the mind

    A lonely bud in a colourful setting,
    The world an unknown sea
    A view of lost-love
    And the old memories

    No one is to see
    The minds of me
    For I am the forgotten
    The forgotten memory

    A lonely bud in a beautiful world
    That has no longer the right to explore
    And we all take for granted
    That for us it’s an open door.

    These pieces of our lives
    Those are there for perfected growth
    We must take our responsibilities
    And to them we make the oath

    Rate it please x

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    • John Westlake Veteran Poet - 3rd Stage (8/31/2014 6:48:00 AM) Post reply

      Am a little surprised that you do not post these directly on to your page. May I respectfully request that you post your poems directly on to your site so that more people can read the. Not everyone ... more

  • Abekah Emmanuel Freshman - 2nd Stage (8/25/2014 2:55:00 AM) Post reply

    Hello Fellow hunters, hope you are all doing great, my latest poem is entitled GOOD MORNING!
    please enjoy, and dont forget to leave your personal comment on it...remember to rate it as well........thank you all.


    When the night sweeps
    Away the last drop of darkness,
    And Aurora, with her cold wind,
    Gently wakes up from her sleep
    And with the help of the sun,
    Split light into every corners,
    It reminds the nursing mother
    Of the child who cried last night,
    It strikes the heart of the caring father
    Of the unfinished house at the site
    And alerts the poet of an unfinished verse
    Of a dirge, whose theme is nothing but death.
    But isn't it amazing,
    How our minds are occupied
    By varieties of dreams which are blazing
    In every nerve which must surely be achieved.
    To me, every morning brings a sad joy,
    And I know you want to know how,
    It sprinkles fresh hope to the boy
    While, slowly, it pushes me to my grave.
    As long as I am not ready to bow,
    Every morning, is surely a good morning!

  • John Sky Dadzie Rookie - 1st Stage (8/24/2014 5:55:00 AM) Post reply | Read 1 reply

    Hi i think i agree with emmanuel the senior hunters should pay a little more attention to us the younger ones tank u.

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    • John Westlake Veteran Poet - 3rd Stage (8/30/2014 2:50:00 AM) Post reply

      There are many thousands of members on this site. There are some who only read the works of younger poets, while others have their own preferences. I am currently trying to clear a huge list of poem ... more

  • Zoila T. Flores Rookie - 1st Stage (8/20/2014 7:59:00 PM) Post reply

    I would say that to write poetry is simple and complicate at the same time. The secret to succeed on it is just to keep going until your mind has jammed.....Or check this beautiful poem named 'THE POESY" By Zoila T. Flores

    Good Luck!

  • Abekah Emmanuel Freshman - 2nd Stage (8/20/2014 5:48:00 AM) Post reply

    I am back again fellow hunters...... my new poem is entitled...........ALL BUT DREAMS.....please do read it and comment as well. I would also be glad to receive more personal criticisms from everyone that reads my poems. thank you all and have a good day.(Dont forget to rate it also)

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