Teen Poetry and Discussions
(9/15/2012 1:12:00 PM)
hey people can everyone please read my poems
Lamis Fahal .
(9/5/2012 2:00:00 PM)
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Hey can u plz give ur opinion on my poem bcz I want to improve my writings.. So if u have any comments I would love to read them and u can check some more
He made her happy
He made her fly
But she turned him down
So will he ever try
She was so scared
He will break her heart
Not to do that he sweared
But still she push them apart
She was too shy
To edmitt to her self
He wondered why
He thinks she doesn't love him
But he is all that's on her mind
all night and all day
Their conversations she rewind
But still deny what her heart say
She is afraid
Her heart will be broken
And no one will come to her aid
And to the harsh reality she will be woken
She won't let go of her shell
Not matter how. Hard he tries to break through
So will she allow her self in to his love well
Or will he move on without the love he never knew
Will let her go
Like many others and lose hope
Or will he fight to know
The deep love that he will cherish and protect..
Please leave your comments :) :) ;)
(9/5/2012 7:47:00 AM)
Hi to you all. i am new member. :)
(9/4/2012 11:10:00 AM)
Hi! I am Shivani pillai I am just a begginner in poem writing . So I don't know how good my poems are. I would be very glad if you would read my poems and write comments on it. PLS. do this as I am desperate to know what the world thinks of my poetry.
(8/27/2012 8:16:00 AM)
Hey! i'm new here so please help me promote my poems.... it would be very delighted if u help me...
(8/26/2012 5:31:00 AM)
Hey there I have been on the site for 3 years now. Please come read my poems and comment feedback or message. I tend to use my own style however: D
(8/8/2012 2:36:00 AM)
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Hello, I'm new to the website. I am looking for some advice on writing poetry. I have 2 poems posted so far, however i am unsure of how good my poems are compared to those of other members, if anyone could read them and give me some feedback i'd really appreciate it. Thank you.
(8/4/2012 9:23:00 PM)
my style differs. I write in variety. I like playing with words so visit my page, read my poetry, comment, rate.
(8/1/2012 8:14:00 AM)
please comment on my new poem thanks!
(7/27/2012 9:04:00 AM)
I read a poem called If I Was Lost. It was really good.