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  • Cierrah Smiles Rookie - 1st Stage (9/15/2012 1:12:00 PM) Post reply

    hey people can everyone please read my poems

  • Lamis Fahal . Rookie - 1st Stage (9/5/2012 2:00:00 PM) Post reply | Read 2 replies

    Hey can u plz give ur opinion on my poem bcz I want to improve my writings.. So if u have any comments I would love to read them and u can check some more

    He made her happy
    He made her fly
    But she turned him down
    So will he ever try
    She was so scared
    He will break her heart
    Not to do that he sweared
    But still she push them apart
    She was too shy
    To edmitt to her self
    He wondered why
    He thinks she doesn't love him
    But he is all that's on her mind
    all night and all day
    Their conversations she rewind
    But still deny what her heart say
    She is afraid
    Her heart will be broken
    And no one will come to her aid
    And to the harsh reality she will be woken
    She won't let go of her shell
    Not matter how. Hard he tries to break through
    So will she allow her self in to his love well
    Or will he move on without the love he never knew
    Will let her go
    Like many others and lose hope
    Or will he fight to know
    The deep love that he will cherish and protect..


    Please leave your comments :) :) ;)

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  • Jean Triumfante Rookie - 1st Stage (9/5/2012 7:47:00 AM) Post reply

    Hi to you all. i am new member. :)

  • Shivani Pillai Rookie - 1st Stage (9/4/2012 11:10:00 AM) Post reply

    Hi! I am Shivani pillai I am just a begginner in poem writing . So I don't know how good my poems are. I would be very glad if you would read my poems and write comments on it. PLS. do this as I am desperate to know what the world thinks of my poetry.

    WITH LOVE,
    Shivani Pillai

  • Rishab Parakh Rookie - 1st Stage (8/27/2012 8:16:00 AM) Post reply

    Hey! i'm new here so please help me promote my poems.... it would be very delighted if u help me...

    http://www.poemhunter.com/poem/women-76/
    http://www.poemhunter.com/poem/strange-33/
    http://www.poemhunter.com/poem/tear-drop-from-heaven/

    Thank you!

  • Anthony Han Rookie - 1st Stage (8/26/2012 5:31:00 AM) Post reply

    Hey there I have been on the site for 3 years now. Please come read my poems and comment feedback or message. I tend to use my own style however: D

  • Garrett Richardson Rookie - 1st Stage (8/8/2012 2:36:00 AM) Post reply | Read 1 reply

    Hello, I'm new to the website. I am looking for some advice on writing poetry. I have 2 poems posted so far, however i am unsure of how good my poems are compared to those of other members, if anyone could read them and give me some feedback i'd really appreciate it. Thank you.

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  • Freddy Ibarra Rookie - 1st Stage (8/4/2012 9:23:00 PM) Post reply

    my style differs. I write in variety. I like playing with words so visit my page, read my poetry, comment, rate.
    http://www.poemhunter.com/freddy-ibarra/

  • Nicklas Leow Rookie - 1st Stage (8/1/2012 8:14:00 AM) Post reply

    http://www.poemhunter.com/poem/rain-578/
    please comment on my new poem thanks!

  • Mystirious Poet Rookie - 1st Stage (7/27/2012 9:04:00 AM) Post reply

    I read a poem called If I Was Lost. It was really good.

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