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  • Rookie Ella Pitt (10/25/2012 1:12:00 PM) Post reply
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    New to poem hunter i've posted three poems so far and would be very appreciative if anybody cares to take a look. I'm also very open to criticism and suggestion

  • Rookie - 72 Points Yash Shinde (10/23/2012 6:32:00 AM) Post reply

    hi this is yash shinde from India.............I am new to this site...........so I need the help of great poets like you to excel.......please do read my poems and comment., ........: -)

  • Rookie Daniel Einstein (10/22/2012 4:27:00 PM) Post reply

    Hi, my name is...well, Daniel Einstein, I have been in this site for a decent amount of time and I always ask you
    Guys to send me a private message with at least two of your favorite poems that you have written. I will read them, and promptly comment or rate depending on
    the poem. I hope to hear from you guys soon.

  • Rookie - 20 Points Akanksha Bhatt (10/19/2012 7:32:00 AM) Post reply

    Hello to all of you. Hope you are doing well. There is a humble request to you to read some of my poems and dropp your comments on them! I hope you'll like them.PLEASE RATE AND COMMENT!
    With Regards
    Thanking You
    :)
    Akanksha

  • Rookie Imaan Farooq (10/12/2012 12:33:00 PM) Post reply

    please if anyone can give me a speech on any 1 of these
    the world of machines is the death of heart
    or
    we will have to change ourselves for our country's promotion

    please help. i need this urgently.

  • Rookie Jazmyn Caddiell (10/8/2012 1:58:00 PM) Post reply

    well conna i love your poems maybe think of coming a writer

  • Rookie Jazmyn Caddiell (10/8/2012 1:57:00 PM) Post reply

    on the beach side just sitting there me and i under the sun letting the sun hitting my golden skin

    just me and i letting the water hit my feet, feeling the saltyness of from the cool water.

    just me and i

  • Rookie Kourtney Delagarza (10/7/2012 11:36:00 PM) Post reply | Read 3 replies

    Hi everyone! I'm trying to become a poet but I'm having trouble starting. Anyone want to give me some advice, tips anything?!

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    • Rookie Akanksha Bhatt (10/19/2012 7:27:00 AM) Post reply

      Poetry is nothing but just our imagination...! Write mostly everything whatever comes to your mind anytime! Keep a pen and paper with you so that you can write the thing coming into your mind that tim ... more

    • Rookie Jamil Ahmed (10/14/2012 4:24:00 AM) Post reply

      HI! There is no hard and fast rule to be a poet. Poetry is nothing but the expression of the spontaneous feelings of heart and mind. so the best way is to just give words to the expressions of you ... more

    • Rookie Onyeme John (10/13/2012 3:39:00 AM) Post reply

      Hi kourtney?I got this from the internet. It helps me too. 1. Inspiration; raindrops, sunshine, mountains, love, just see whats around u. 2. Information, you'ld have to know more about ur main subj ... more

  • Rookie Conna Rice (10/1/2012 5:24:00 PM) Post reply

    Hello everyone I'm Conna 17 iv just written a few new poems and would love to know what you think of them I will read and rate yours if you send me the link I only have 3 short ones on there at the moment and just wanted a few different views please

  • Rookie Makayla Johnson (9/25/2012 4:23:00 PM) Post reply

    Hi, I'd like to know what you all think of my poem " The Artisan Knight" .

    Here I am, the gallant knight,
    trapped in a room where I cannot fight.
    Here I am silent and still,
    gazing out the windowsill.

    I paint the world outside my cell,
    dragons and demons fight as well
    as the battles raging in my head,
    the harrowing feeling that I might be dead.

    I let my brush sweep the skies,
    I build a world full of whys.
    Dizzily, I speckle stars
    and give new life to planet Mars.

    But footsteps break me from my page,
    I pace inside the mental cage,
    my mind is melting with my brush,
    its colours dulled, no longer lush.

    I hear them calling out my name
    but I must paint just one more frame,
    dripping down across the sheet,
    I let the colour stain my feet.

    One with art and art has won,
    I'm done, dear god, at last I'm done.
    I cannot take the pain much more,
    the voice who screams, my mind so sore.

    So here I am, the gallant knight,
    who has long since lost his final fight.
    Here I am, my mind a flood,
    painting pretty pictures with blood.

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