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  • Aimee Woolford (8/26/2014 6:28:00 AM) Post reply Stage

    THE OATH – In a sea of the mind

    A lonely bud in a colourful setting,
    The world an unknown sea
    A view of lost-love
    And the old memories

    No one is to see
    The minds of me
    For I am the forgotten
    The forgotten memory

    A lonely bud in a beautiful world
    That has no longer the right to explore
    And we all take for granted
    That for us it’s an open door.

    These pieces of our lives
    Those are there for perfected growth
    We must take our responsibilities
    And to them we make the oath



    Rate it please x

  • Abekah Emmanuel (8/25/2014 2:55:00 AM) Post reply Stage

    Hello Fellow hunters, hope you are all doing great, my latest poem is entitled GOOD MORNING!
    please enjoy, and dont forget to leave your personal comment on it...remember to rate it as well........thank you all.

    GOOD MORNING!

    When the night sweeps
    Away the last drop of darkness,
    And Aurora, with her cold wind,
    Gently wakes up from her sleep
    And with the help of the sun,
    Split light into every corners,
    It reminds the nursing mother
    Of the child who cried last night,
    It strikes the heart of the caring father
    Of the unfinished house at the site
    And alerts the poet of an unfinished verse
    Of a dirge, whose theme is nothing but death.
    But isn't it amazing,
    How our minds are occupied
    By varieties of dreams which are blazing
    In every nerve which must surely be achieved.
    To me, every morning brings a sad joy,
    And I know you want to know how,
    It sprinkles fresh hope to the boy
    While, slowly, it pushes me to my grave.
    As long as I am not ready to bow,
    Every morning, is surely a good morning!

  • John Sky Dadzie (8/24/2014 5:55:00 AM) Post reply Stage

    Hi i think i agree with emmanuel the senior hunters should pay a little more attention to us the younger ones tank u.

  • Zoila T. Flores (8/20/2014 7:59:00 PM) Post reply Stage

    I would say that to write poetry is simple and complicate at the same time. The secret to succeed on it is just to keep going until your mind has jammed.....Or check this beautiful poem named 'THE POESY" By Zoila T. Flores

    Good Luck!

  • Abekah Emmanuel (8/20/2014 5:48:00 AM) Post reply Stage

    I am back again fellow hunters...... my new poem is entitled...........ALL BUT DREAMS.....please do read it and comment as well. I would also be glad to receive more personal criticisms from everyone that reads my poems. thank you all and have a good day.(Dont forget to rate it also)

  • Mohammad Skati (8/19/2014 3:19:00 PM) Post reply Stage

    From my thorough readings of some students here and there, I can say that some students are great poets and great poetess. Some students and teens need only to be encouraged and to be helped in different ways.

  • Mohammad Skati (8/19/2014 3:18:00 PM) Post reply | Read 1 reply Stage

    From my thorough readings of some students here and there, I can say that some students are great poets and great poetess. Some students and teens need only to be encouraged and to be helped in different ways.

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    • Abekah Emmanuel (8/20/2014 2:09:00 AM) Post reply Stage

      Yes my fellow poet....all that we need is encouragement and motivation and we shall excel. Thanks for your concern.

  • Abekah Emmanuel (8/18/2014 3:07:00 AM) Post reply Stage

    Indeed, if adult hunters would pay much attention to teen hunters' poems, they would know that classical poets are abundant here. Goodmorning to all my fellow hunters, have you read my poem SOMEDAY TO COME?check it out, enjoy it, rate and comment on it as well. Thank you all.

  • Vincent Barrowcliffe (8/17/2014 2:12:00 PM) Post reply Stage

    There are some really great poets out here. I may be of no standard, but I invite all of you to read my poems and comment. I may not formally introduce myself, for you may come to know me soon.

  • Abekah Emmanuel (8/17/2014 9:05:00 AM) Post reply Stage

    hello.... check out my new poems. PLEASE dont forget to cooment and rate them as well. My latest poem is entitled, NOT YET TOLD....

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