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  • Rookie - 17 Points Ruby Honeytip (10/26/2012 7:13:00 PM) Post reply
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    This is my newest poem. It's about the feelings a beautiful woman can pull from a man........

    She is draped over a chair,  
    Artfully fashioned
    Like a fine piece 
    Of silk.
    He imagines that her softness 
    Would sweetly mould into
    His hands
    Like ripe fruit.
    She stays still and silent,  
    Letting him consume her
    With his hungry eyes.
    He drinks her in,  
    The fullness of her breast,  
    The gentle curve of her hip
    And the honeyed tones of her
    Naked skin.
    Her natural beauty
    Has him mesmerised....
    Lips apart,  
    Heart pounding,  
    He feels the heat of creation rise in him
    And with power and purpose,  
    His eyes break contact as
    He touches
    His brush
    To the canvas. 
    Ruby Honeytip

  • Rookie Dragon Crenshaw (10/19/2012 9:39:00 PM) Post reply

    The guy I thought i loved actually loved me not.
    I thought that love would be easier to find,
    But it is not.
    I'm in a maze,
    like a mouse,
    cant find my way out.
    do i have to shout for help,
    or do i just ask
    confused and mad,
    lost and dead.
    please help,
    i in need of some help
    my heart cant take another " we're through"
    and i want to scream and shout
    that i want out
    but my voice is silenced by yours

  • Rookie Conna Rice (10/5/2012 6:07:00 PM) Post reply

    Hello I'm new to writteing and iv posted 4 of my best work on here and one of them is for my girl friend Emily I was just wondering if someone could read it and give me a little advise on how to improve in any way?I would be really grateful

  • Rookie Michelle Mccann (10/5/2012 3:05:00 PM) Post reply

    You were my love of my life you were my soul mate my best freiand you said you would always be there i belived the words you told me i shared my thoughts with you i.put my trust in you i thought we were for life till the day you walket out my life without a word you left me with my heart broking i never thought i would be the same again or trust again it took years till i did but i will always hold it close to my heart the hurt you put me through x

  • Rookie - 17 Points Ruby Honeytip (10/1/2012 5:24:00 AM) Post reply

    Left Behind
    Here he comes!  
    Her heart beats faster.
    She hears his voice
    And lets it drip through her awareness
    Like warm honey.
    She feels sparkles of electricity
    As he passes behind her.
    Her skin prickles,  
    She shivers.
    Her softness peaks,  
    Her spirits lift....
    But only for this frozen instant,  
    And they fall as he strides away.
    She does not turn around to face him
    Because, in the depths of him,  
    She senses a deep abiding disinterest.
    Oh how she is mistaken...
    He walks away
    Clenching his fists,  
    Inhaling the last of her perfume,  
    And thinking only of her. 
    Ruby Honeytip

  • Rookie Rebecca Dalmaso (9/28/2012 3:44:00 AM) Post reply

    How sad it is that we are estranged
    I expect you find me broken and deranged
    How sad it is you are owned by your fear
    Searching the world for what is so near
    How sad it is our time is the past
    Nurture your courage and make it grow fast
    How sad it is our ignorance of fate
    Souls incomplete and left in this state
    How sad it is i was left with no voice
    Two beating hearts that must live with your choice

  • Rookie Lamis Fahal . (9/13/2012 7:09:00 AM) Post reply

    Should I let go

    Should I let go
    Of my perfectly safe shell
    Because I don't really know
    Will I fly or drown in an endless well
    Will he protect me
    Or make me a part of a bigger game
    Is there a trick that I don't see
    Will he make me hate my life and name
    Will he stab me in the back
    And lie in my face
    My heart will he crack
    And make me feel outa place
    Should I just be me
    And act according to that reckless mind of mine
    Should I believe what you say
    But iis it you, or just another play

    Please leave your comments

  • Rookie Katrina Britnie (9/11/2012 9:58:00 PM) Post reply | Read 1 reply

    i wrote a poem because i am confused and sad. Im not a writter or a poet. I just needed to vent.

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    • Rookie Okoronkwo Jackson Jonathan (10/4/2012 11:12:00 PM) Post reply

      There is a special ability in every man but what makes the difference is the extra effort put to the developing of the ability. You are not a poet, yes! But that spirit is in you if only you can allow ... more

  • Rookie Lady Wind (9/10/2012 2:05:00 AM) Post reply

    Dawn found me. She smiled ever so light. Soft kisses she blew 'round my room. Whispers age old, 'A new day'. Thoughts of you shimmer and dance within golden shards, To tenderly pierce my dreams in remembrance... The wonder of you Part of my heart.

  • Rookie - 13 Points Dominic Hunt (8/27/2012 3:57:00 PM) Post reply

    You are the sun
    You bring hope after the darkness of night
    Light up my days with new beginnings
    Hold me in your rays of warmth
    You are the wind
    Changeable always
    You blow strong and weak
    Surprising day to day
    You are the rain
    I need you to grow
    Yet dampen my spirits
    Nourishing, devastating
    You are the ocean
    Mysterious, deep
    Tidal is your nature
    Endless waves of emotion you bring
    You are the tempest
    Making me feel alive
    Exhilarating, scary
    Life on the edge
    You are the moon
    Waxing and waning
    Peaceful, beautiful
    A wonder to me
    You are the mountains
    Formidable, grand
    Standing before you
    Entranced by your immensity
    You are the snow
    Softly you fall about
    Each part is different
    Pure and driven
    You are the trees
    Shading me from hurts
    Shedding again and again
    Offering hope anew
    You are the flowers
    Bright, cheerful
    Many colors
    Change with the seasons
    You are the mystery
    Never revealing all
    Keeping parts hidden
    Holding me spellbound

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