Relationships and Love

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  • Rookie Tiffany Baldwin (12/17/2012 3:56:00 AM) Post reply
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    " Why cant you see?"

    Its hard to describe how I feel right now.
    I want to explain it but I don't know how.
    I can not believe that it has come to this.
    It's our world too, not just his
    No matter how hard all of us try,
    It seems like he will never hear us cry.
    It feels like all we did was beg, scream, and yell,
    but he just didn't hear us...., it was a living hell.
    The little boy all he wants is his Daddy's' acceptance,
    but the fathers too busy keeping his distance.
    The little boy is so curious, he has so many, 'Whys?',
    but the fathers so stubborn, why won't he open his eyes.?
    The little girl all she wants is to spend quality time with her Dad,
    but the father just doesn't get it... it breaks her heart and makes her so sad.
    The little girl just wants to be his princess, to be adored and be seen,
    she asks her mother in confusion, 'Does he know I'm almost thirteen?'
    Then finally the woman who all she ever needed was just him.
    The man just kept on leaving and sadly their light began to dim.
    She gave him her all and trusted him with every bit of herself.
    He didn't see that the distance made her feel like he just put their love on the back of an old rickety shelf.
    The poor man was so blind, he never saw it coming, his entire life just falling apart.
    She tried telling him so many times, she needed him to stay with her, to fix her broken heart.
    The heart that had been broken, by the one who she trusted the most.
    she asked him to stay there with her, but his presence became a cold distant ghost.
    The days became weeks of sadness, emptiness and pain,
    Why couldn't he just quit fishing?The man had so much to gain.
    The woman slowly lost hope, clung to a strangers effortless attention.
    Became lost in her own world of confusion and apprehension.
    If only the man would have stopped to See the woman who desperately loved him disappear.
    The end may not have manifested and brought forth, their worst possible fear.

    Tiffany Baldwin

  • Rookie - 0 Points Austin Straussfield (12/14/2012 7:59:00 AM) Post reply

    Check this out peeps, though a little rough...your advice and criticism is would go a long way to smoothen my writings...
    Quietly bending my pride,
    for you to become my bride
    so as to have a smooth ride
    till a child comes our way.
    Take this not as dried
    or too crunchy fried.
    But rather be mild,
    and see me as wild
    with no where to hide
    'trying to pass the tide
    created by your dad...'

  • Rookie Karoliena Somura (12/2/2012 10:04:00 PM) Post reply

    Heres the relationship I have of my mother and father expressed in these two poems. " Secret Sins of My Father" and " Mamma Don't" , enjoy my reality. Love?My friends for now suffice enough, and mom, keeps me tough and my sister, well haha, shes a lil brat just like any lil sister.

  • Rookie Yahya Ahmed (11/20/2012 7:12:00 PM) Post reply

    Hey everyone :)

    Im new to this site just uploaded some writing of mine, please check them out.

    Thank You

    Yahya Ahmed

  • Gold Star - 23,982 Points Gajanan Mishra (11/18/2012 8:55:00 AM) Post reply

    In my thought in my love in my poetry I am with you
    O my dear I am clear see my heart better
    Love is truth and truth is love and purer
    And is illuminating my breathing process
    My love you are the cause of all causes.

  • Rookie - 0 Points Sahil Sood (11/17/2012 9:58:00 AM) Post reply | Read 1 reply

    Hey frndz,
    I request you all to read my new poem 'The Friend I Lost'
    I wrote this poem for a very special friend whom i lost following few misunderstandings. But i really want her back..
    I am sure you will relate this poem with you..

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  • Rookie Scarlett Outlaw (11/15/2012 8:48:00 AM) Post reply

    Love is really annoying...
    sometimes you like someone, they don't like you
    you think that you will never have a chance with them,
    like me - a guy I like... will never like me...

    he is funny, sweet and kind.
    he tells me a lot of things that he doesnt tell anyone else.
    Me?I do the same to him - I tell him things... things I cannot tell anyone else...

    what can you do with love?Stick it somewhere deep inside your heart...

  • Rookie - 10 Points Leonardo David Tay (11/5/2012 3:53:00 AM) Post reply | Read 1 reply

    Saw this on my teacher's desktop:
    " Love is like a rubber band stretched by two different fingers on both ends. When one leaves, the other hurts."

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    • Rookie - 10 Points Riffat Samad (12/3/2012 4:50:00 AM) Post reply

      Because any relationship develops on mutual trust. If any one breaks the trust then the other one hurts.

  • Rookie - 2 Points Tony Travinci (11/5/2012 2:05:00 AM) Post reply

    Love is a fire it can either grow, diminish and even end and it can also rekindle

  • Rookie - 30 Points Martha Ikiring (10/29/2012 4:24:00 AM) Post reply

    hey poem hunter funs, here is a quote " your touch, a cool caress soaking every fibre in my skin. the love i fell for your is beyond the raging flames of an inferno.'

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