(11/18/2013 10:12:00 AM)
Whenever you get the chance, would you mind going take a look at my poem?I'm pretty new to this. Thanks :)
(11/17/2013 12:32:00 PM)
Please read my poems and give feedback to improve my writing... thanks
(11/16/2013 8:42:00 AM)
Kindly I need someone to critique my poems. If you are here's the link http://www.poemhunter.com/major-elazia/
(11/16/2013 4:27:00 AM)
http://www.poemhunter.com/mary-amrutha/ please read and help me in improving. God bless you all
(11/15/2013 9:34:00 AM)
Please read, rate and comment using web Tagalog-English translators. The emotions of this poem are very intense and I can't translate it into English.
Literary poem: A Tribute and inspired from (Haiyan) Yolanda tragedy with Filipino victims and survivors)
Froilan Jay Guiral
(11/15/2013 8:07:00 AM)
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A Mother's Heart
By: Dakilang Guro
If I have to sketch in a canvass,
I'll paint and draw my mother's heart,
The brushes; able to hide the snakes in the grass,
With a thousand soldiers; she can fight and protect.
Her heart is full of compassion,
Able to wear a smile even if life is often ironic,
In dealing each mare's nest and dilemma,
Yet, she loves to play the big waves, her challenges.
Every whereabouts, she takes the risks,
She's able to grasp the world for the existence of survival,
She's creative, able to stand out!
The best portrait! , a mother's heart.
(11/14/2013 12:17:00 PM)
Thou my lord
Thou are the God;
Grant me peace and solace
Source on me your knowledge;
Change me into humane
I suffer from insomnia
And full of insolence;
Irreverant, scamp I am
But today I lament
Nemesis I deserve
But today I rue;
Don't mortify me
Don't desert me
At the judgement day;
O my Lord
Don't leave me in lurch;
O my Almighty
Omnipresent you are
Thou are eternal
Evacuate me from here
Drown me into euphoric sea;
Bolshie don't make me
Narcotic, make me not
Your pardon I want
Your forgiveness I want
Forgive me before I kick the bucket!
(11/14/2013 9:43:00 AM)
where ever you go, i will find you in my way. loving you is my life, doesn't matter what the people say. i will fixed you in my heart, so you won't go away. loving you is my life, doesn't matter what the people say.
sun rises&sets, still blue is sky. nothing is changed, except me & i. i do believe that god in the sky, has made a love story for u & i.
i waited so long for your reply my baby. proposed you on sunday, you gave me on tuesday.
today i dreamt of a day, where we were together & world was away. you brought happiness to my life & made my days. i talked to you & my pain disappeared away.
i will stand with you, even if you lie. do anything for you, without asking why.
my love is eternity, it has no end. i will love you forever till my last breath comes in.
I LOVE YOU SO MUCH
(11/14/2013 8:25:00 AM)
How god works in a few words
Poem book write me the poem that I will like, feel, love and care about
Its not a rhyme and not a crime to unwind time to correct your mistakes that you made
Past life feelings makes sure to be unkind and feel not fine that’s the end of this line
The regret that you will find will kill you slowly inside but that will create you time to think about your wining
Pain an pleasure is my last time to feel miserable for my mistakes that will unwind
That feeling will heal you in time and you will feel more riches in your live
Power is power but only in my mind that how i see the world around and it will come back around
What if you have healed your regret and the mistakes that you made makes you more shore about yourself
That will create more power of health in your mind, body and soul and will make you feel old
Feeling old will create a new body that you will feel from your soul and that is not old your soul
Suffer for your soul so you will not feel old, make more feelings grow old that’s the power of your soul
The powers who grow old will make your time go slow depends what powers you will have
Pick them right after every time you have been told by god
He or she is what will have a will for you and a way to follow your own way and it will be your way
The ways you can follow are full with pain, regret, love, time, suffer and understanding
God has his own way to make you understand your way and he will help you with your way
Picking the wrong way is not a mistake if you do not know it, in you in yourself you will find the true you
That’s how religion works and the end of my poem.
Hadarms Dha Poet
(11/11/2013 9:53:00 AM)
Everywhere was silent as it always BE,
As all them are out to their various WAYS.
The rats came out as they always DOES,
Perching on left-overs and some little DOUGHS.
The ants were busy as was their NATURE,
Fighting and working was for their NATION.
They played with selves and laughed on OTHERS,
Singing a song of triumph kissing their MOTHERS.
I looked around and saw none but ME,
Donning myself a sleep made my head A-STILL.
I sleep, i sleep as i often DO,
Waking up everytime with a dreamy MOVE.
I screwed somethings and mend the HOUSE-HOLES,
As i got nothing worthwhile to do with HOUSE-HOLDS.
I glanced here, there and every NOOKS,
Seeing a pen lying made my eyes LOOKED.
I scribbled and made some sound on a PIECE,
Thinking what i could do with my heart A-PIECE.
I tried some tactics, workings and some SOLUTIONS,
Searching and profering some answers with a CONCLUSION.
I then realised it's making me to SHINE,
Waiting everywhere for me just to make a TRY.
It's gonna write my name on the legend's book,
Making me to stand with the wealthy ZEUS'.
Its mightiness cannot be DOUBTED,
Just a little try and you're MOUTHED.