(10/6/2012 10:45:00 AM)
Joyous rain falls descendant upon my sorrow, Oh that joyous rain!
Returns to me sweet reminiscing memories of my goddesses mirthful all my solitude and pain
As years had passed, so had my vigorous love, beith once for mirth; yet her foreboding left me in cluttering vain
The action it lead me into was nothing more than a piteous pouring pit of that glorious joyous rain!
In all of which my soul shalt claim, whilst I stand in this striking rains all of the memories of that one of mirth
In time mayhaps I retrieve that grasp of thought, or that peace leading me to ease and perhaps meeting her shall give me rebirth
Yet in all of my doubt, and all of my forlorn insomnia, each and every day I wear a necklace with an attached flask while I traverse this earth
Within the interior of the flask lie the memories in formal tears of all of these years she has made cause to be away, ah, yea, tis my attached curse
And in her absence and in this flask of sorrow revolves me into an involuntary depression, and as she runs from me my heart rides along on this invisible hearse
At moments end, the reappearance of mirth may surely Come on a day I possess old age and a time where perhaps I am sane
Though one thing is for sure, Oh that mirth and how I know that on that day shall be loves promised day, vow and ever falling upon me surely shall be joyous rain!
(10/6/2012 6:35:00 AM)
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Check this out...i'm kinda new here and will be needing guide from the experienced one...please i want you all to comment on this
" I never knew i could fly
until i see you cry
Patiently waiting for your smile
but it's way long along the tide
you make me walk the mile
even though its for a while
i never knew i could fly
until i see me try..."Replies for this message:
(10/28/2012 3:55:00 PM)
Not bad for one just starting..got to the end and read again..concept good. I have to write in rhyme..easy for reader. I don't use complicated wording. You can check my style. I get pleasure when no ... more
(10/16/2012 12:06:00 PM)
I'm new here too, don't worry. I think it was great! Im not experienced with this site, but I have been writing poems since I was 5, so I have experience in writing.
- Brian Skyers (10/28/2012 3:55:00 PM) Post reply
(10/5/2012 10:03:00 AM)
Hey hey! Im Back yet again, got new poems for only u and u and u! Titled 'this living' -'i loved you! ' and so much more interesting reads, enjoy ur read.
(10/2/2012 7:01:00 PM)
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I can't find poetry contest. When I click on Poetry Contest this page pops up again.
(10/2/2012 5:18:00 PM)
Everone who reads this message, please read my new poem called Don't Wake Me Up. I look forward to your feedback. Thanks! G
(10/2/2012 1:32:00 PM)
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PLEASE, HOW DO I JOIN THE CONTEST
TO PROVE I AM THE BEST.
I AM FROM THE WEST
AND HAVE SOMETHING FOR MY GUEST
(10/2/2012 12:52:00 PM)
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Hi There Lovely Poets: -)
I wrote this poem about my babies and would love to know what you think. Too sappy?
Mother Of Light
You started as a droplet inside a shell,
Warm, languid, liquid.
Now that safe harbour,
Has turned you into a sea.
To create you, every wonderful thing I've thought,
Every ray of light I've ever seen,
Was harnessed in that single drop.
To nourish...to divide,
Cell by cell
Pouring forward from me,
Toward my ultimate worth.
I didn't know it,
But until that point,
My world had been flat.
You helped me peek over the edge,
We looked into an unfolding universe,
Then you jumped with me!
A galaxy of light and giggles
Radiated through me,
To get to you.
Spirit and Soul,
Light and Hope.
You are so much more
Than an extension
Of my heart or limb.
I am, because of you.
You are, because of me.
Forever bundled in love,
I get to be your Mother.
(10/2/2012 10:47:00 AM)
Hi, I just joined the site and have put 7 poems up so far. When I look on 'Manage my Poems' it says that only three of them are 'online'. Does anyone know what this means?Please read, vote and comment and my poems, it will be much appreciated! I recommend reading 'Teddy Bear'. Thankyou ever so much. I will definitely check out the poems of anyone who comments on mine. :)
(10/2/2012 4:24:00 AM)
I have written a new poem on talents of old people, I want your comments pl
(10/2/2012 4:23:00 AM)
hi poets, I am from Sri Lanka, I do not take long to write a poem, I start and finish it off straightaway