(9/19/2012 8:24:00 PM)
Hello there guys and gals, Well, i am not looking for people to comment on my Poems, no sir, i would like for all of you out there to Give me your name and Favorite poems, and i will Comment and like them depends on their awesomeness, Don't be afraid and Message me your Favorite poems, Good day.
Mercy Oyesa Oluchina
(9/19/2012 2:18:00 PM)
am new around and am anxious to know what you think about my poems(i have posted two of them so far) . i would really appreciate your opinions.
(9/19/2012 10:21:00 AM)
can i please get my pieces read see if im wasting my time thanking you gavin boyle
(9/19/2012 6:19:00 AM)
I am very new here and I have posted three poems. do read them and rate them. and don't be shy, I won't mind negative comments. :)
but please read and rate them.... I really need you guys to tell me how I am at poem writing! ! !
(9/18/2012 6:20:00 PM)
Hey guys, hoping you guys could read my poems to critique them and rate them, don't be shy and tell me what you think.
(9/18/2012 6:16:00 PM)
i joined a few minutes ago. haven't really gotten accustomed to this yet but i posted two of my poems :) so feel free to read them. i'll post up more once i get accustomed to the site and figure out how things work.
please and thank you!
(9/18/2012 8:20:00 AM)
hey you all respected poets.
i am a new member of this family.
so i would love if you read my poems and leave your important comments to let me know your feedback about those poems.
(9/17/2012 7:50:00 PM)
Well, I'm new to this, so please go read m poem and tell me what you think. Have a wonderful day!
(9/15/2012 2:23:00 PM)
Newest poem feel free to read ma poems i got a new one titled farewell
Lamis Fahal .
(9/13/2012 7:07:00 AM)
Please read my poem and comment please and if you liked it feel free to read the rest of them.....
Should I let go
Should I let go
Of my perfectly safe shell
Because I don't really know
Will I fly or drown in an endless well
Will he protect me
Or make me a part of a bigger game
Is there a trick that I don't see
Will he make me hate my life and name
Will he stab me in the back
And lie in my face
My heart will he crack
And make me feel outa place
Should I just be me
And act according to that reckless mind of mine
Should I believe what you say
But iis it you, or just another play