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... Dog God 8hate ... Dog God 8hate Male, 100, United States (8/9/2014 11:20:00 AM)

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Preachy? People suggest i'm ... " preachy?"
my barbarous babbling plods skewed zones,
it's perishable conceit ... i've not the aptitude
for such civility, and of those ... more instructional,
pious men ....

Let the world save itself, i'm mounted on a stuffed horse,
no bridle ... no saddle ... and it, doesn't ... move.

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  • Freshman - 1,415 Points Professor Plum (8/9/2014 12:56:00 PM) Post reply
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    " perishable conceit" PEOPLE, see what I mean??This guy can smash the words together like no other. It's like having a Cuisinart for words and phrases. You just dump the English language into this guy, and it comes out like a beautiful mole sauce. I'm going to stop raving now for fear he may get embarrassed (I hope he doesn't. He won't return my phone calls so I don't know what he's thinking) . Get on board.

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