I'm not sure if you're joking or not, Scott, but this is a review from a reader, not a real literary critic; and I'm speaking as someone who is working toward that goal. That said, I found these snippets to be interestingly dark and comic. I didn't realize anyone in here had books out.
A (whoever you are) , Mia is a good poet and educated writer. If being a literary critic means making your living by doing it, then she's not one. Neither are 95% of the writers online and elsewhere who critique others' work.