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Scotty Dogg Scotty Dogg Male, 44, United States (10/25/2013 7:22:00 PM)

Anyone have any feelings one way or the other?I whittled it down as far as I could go. Jeff, I got your 'stench' in there(sort of) . I kind of like the title.



Look Ma! He Did a Dali


Glare through melted
Swiss cheese at
Giraffed Jumbos
And female watch parts
Without
Cyphers or mustaches.
Exaggerated chattel
Nicknamed “Claptrap”
Framed and stenched.

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  • Rookie - 762 Points Lamont Palmer (10/26/2013 4:46:00 PM) Post reply | Read 1 reply
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    Hopper Apartment.


    Lit by chance: fractured noon.
    Stunned to be sentient.
    The room conjures smoke,
    a spareness, impenetrable;
    empty air grows like blurred
    neck; aces.
    I remembered your stance;
    I worshipped your skirt,
    lazily, on the heartwood floors.

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    • Rookie - 762 Points Scotty Dogg (10/26/2013 9:32:00 PM) Post reply

      Ha! Love it! You are a fiend, you know that? The " aces" makes it. That is so cool. I love poetry! I love the way you guys punctuate your poems. So unique. So fun to read too!

  • Rookie - 72 Points Scotty Dogg (10/26/2013 9:32:00 AM) Post reply

    Poetfreak challenge. Write a poem about a painter. An over the top (minimalist) poem about an over the top painter?? Anyone?Hello?I'll take this as a " Don't quit your day job" LOL! I'll keep trying. Maybe. : /

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