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delilah contrapunctal Female, 95, United States (8/28/2013 11:43:00 PM)

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Dream of Koa Returning

Sitting on the steps of that cabin
that I had always known
with its porch and gray-painted floorboards
I looked out to the river
flowing behind the big trees
and all at once you
were just behind me
lying watching me
as you did years ago
and not stirring at all
when I reached back slowly
hoping to touch your long amber fur
and there we stayed without moving
listening to the river
and I wondered whether
it might be a dream
whether you might be a dream
whether we both were a dream
in which neither of us moved

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  • Bronze Star - 2,059 Points Bull Hawking (8/29/2013 3:48:00 PM) Post reply
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    Damn fine poem D.....thanks for posting it...this one creates its own magic....creates a small place to live apart from the world's own bustle.....something I have done in my own inner life.

    Keep smilin'

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