Poetics and Poetry Discussion
(6/29/2013 8:08:00 PM)
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Adam, this is pretty awful, even for imitation 19th-century magazine verse! " Feeling the wind between your hair" ? See what happens when you think rhyming is more important than writing a good poem? Stop writing! Please. immerse yourself reading for a year in the best contemporary poetry. Until you do that, you're going to keep writng these amateurish verses.Replies for this message:
S. A. S.
(6/30/2013 12:02:00 AM)
Some people just write because it's fun for them, it's what they do instead of whittle. I do think it might have been more interesting to hear about a guilty sky, but, hey, that's just my bias.
Adam M. Snow
(6/29/2013 8:22:00 PM)
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I will forever write, it is my passion and I will keep on writing til it comes that I shall die.
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