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Allan james Saywell Male, 70, Australia (6/20/2013 11:22:00 PM)

Bus Stop

He always sat at the Bus-stop
Like a poser on a poster
He never caught a Bus
Or read a paper
He never slept
Or ate or drank
He was never early
Nor late-never missed
By anyone or two
He faded like a piece of Art
Lost his colour
As does one in death
Was never meant to last
For ever


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  • Rookie - 9 Points Olta Qejvani (6/22/2013 8:08:00 AM) Post reply | Read 1 reply
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    I think it is meaningful. In fact, the purpose of a poetry is to improve us to think more by reading even like the words of this poetry. Lost his color..... as does one in death lead my mind to find this poetry so strong and meaningful at the same time. My sincerely congratulations.........

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    • Rookie - 9 Points Allan james Saywell (6/22/2013 10:16:00 PM) Post reply

      Thank you for reading my poem, thank you for thinking about what i wrote, also for your thoughts and your kindness Warm Regards AJS

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