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Godfrey Morris Male, 32, Jamaica (11/17/2012 11:07:00 AM)

Nature Paints



Nature Paints

Nature paints the sky in blue,
Then adds the fluffy spots of white
Which sometimes hide the fuel
Of fiery sphere - light
A relief that gives a gracious smile

Nature paints the high mountains green
An emerald of an incline climb
Extending stairway to heavenly dreams,
The peak is in a target's reach

Our nature paints the dark stained soil
A symbol for our hard day's toil
What in its core does treasure hides?
Seek the rainbow you will find
All colors that our artist binds

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  • Rookie - 25 Points Wind Songs Spiritual Poetry (12/29/2012 6:29:00 AM) Post reply
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    Amazing work - I love it. Its a must read.

  • Rookie - 261 Points ... Dog God 8hate (12/14/2012 1:40:00 PM) Post reply

    I presume, way too much... my eye seems to shift
    in variant degrees... to decrees... distant, and...
    as much as deer fleeing
    the fling of your sling...
    in an hour... an hour and...
    a half...?

  • Rookie Emily Strange (11/22/2012 2:19:00 PM) Post reply | Read 1 reply

    thats fantastic your use of words is captivating

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  • Rookie - 261 Points ... Dog God 8hate (11/17/2012 4:34:00 PM) Post reply

    &...

    God free George... please allow for that (illustrious) dark/light peek/view...
    and into hidden graves where the living/dead bury illusion's... dream...
    daily, all day, and... late into... the night....

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