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Ruby Honeytip Ruby Honeytip Female, 45, Australia (11/15/2012 8:17:00 PM)

Sometimes I write about things that frustrate me.... this happens to be one of those things.
So much is decided upon the way a person looks.
I wrote this about a friend of mine and the way she is treated by people.
Do you think I should change the name lol?
I introduce to you

Blinded by Boobies!

She is not skin and bones
Of insignificance.
She is intelligent substance,
And decency of character.
She is womanly flesh
Of hand felt proportions!
She knows her way,
And will hold your hand
Until you safely find yours.
There is no judgement in her compassion,
Although, there is a giggle in her eyes.
There is a wiggle in her walk.
Faith and love are the warmth
In her nature.
There is a nurturing heart
Beating under the fullness of her breast....

Did somebody say 'Breast'?

The story ends there.

Look closer

© 2012

Feel free to pop by my page anytime for a browse and a chat...I don't sleep very well: ^)

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  • Rookie - 477 Points ... Dog God 8hate (11/17/2012 4:23:00 PM) Post reply
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    The MIND... thus depicted portrays arrays-s-s....
    I've observed the diverse suggestions, I've viewed
    and peeked, and wondered... vagary and his goD?

  • Veteran Poet - 1,083 Points Xelam Kan (11/17/2012 7:01:00 AM) Post reply

    my goodness......... so beautiful n lil bit...........gr8

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