Poetics and Poetry Discussion
(9/27/2005 4:49:00 PM)
My feeling is, he could have taken this further with a bit more thought. But a fine idea nevertheless and yes, a strong ending that the rest of the poem doesn't deserve.
Rev. Dr. A. Jacob Hassler
(9/27/2005 3:48:00 PM)
wow. sad poem. i hope it never happens to me.
(9/27/2005 3:38:00 PM)
I'm not sure if I like this poem or not. It's kind of wierd. But I just love the final 'Sometimes...' sentence.
(9/27/2005 3:32:00 PM)
If I may say, I think this is one of the most moving poems I've ever read. I've never heard of this poet but this is wonderful. Mary
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