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  • Ali Khorvash (3/29/2005 6:51:00 AM) Post reply Stage

    hello everybody!
    I want to suggest you read the poem: YOUR PHOTO by SHIRIN PARVARESH.
    I found that very very senseful and beautiful.
    Its rating is 9.1 (13 votes)
    so I invite you all too read it and submit your comments and vote.
    Im sure that you will enjoy it!

  • Ali Khorvash (3/29/2005 6:50:00 AM) Post reply Stage

    thanks Herbert!
    I read and enjoy the poem 'Your Photo' EVERYDAY!

  • Herbert Nehrlich1 (3/29/2005 3:16:00 AM) Post reply | Read 1 reply Stage

    Sandra, although I am not sure you asked anyone and everyone, all 4 of those poems are excellent. They are of the high standard that we have come to expect of you.
    I won't place them in any order as that is always misunderstood. I like two of them more than the other two but I like them all.
    Why do you ask?

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    • Janice M Pickett (3/29/2005 1:27:00 PM) Post reply Stage

      I love Sandra's poems. In fact 3 have gone up at the Palace. She is a very talented and deep writer. I cannot understand why people say such nasty things. I guess it's jealousy because they are so sha ... more

  • Scarborough Gypsy (3/28/2005 11:58:00 PM) Post reply Stage

    Hang on! ! I got that wrong. The order I wrote them (and what I meant to say) was Greatest to Great. If you get my drift.

  • Scarborough Gypsy (3/28/2005 11:56:00 PM) Post reply Stage

    Hi Sandra,

    For me (in order of best to greatest)

    It sounded like
    Between Us Both

    Kind Regards

  • Sandra Osborne (3/28/2005 11:04:00 PM) Post reply | Read 1 reply Stage

    I humble ask each of you, as a poet in search of the truth, if you all would read my last four poems: 'Perfect', 'Between Us Both', 'Stop' and 'It Sounded Like' and please tell me what you think, you too Poetry Hound. Please, I would really like to know. Thank You, Sandra

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    • Janice M Pickett (3/29/2005 1:32:00 PM) Post reply Stage

      Has someone been slamming my friend again? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? How dare they. I don't have to tell you waht I think of your work. You already know. The Palace is the safest place to post. Send p ... more

  • Poetry Hound (3/28/2005 3:01:00 PM) Post reply Stage

    Thank you very much for your kind words, Sylvia. Pardon me if I do not refer to your poetry as doggeral even if you do.

  • Scarborough Gypsy (3/28/2005 5:48:00 AM) Post reply Stage

    Poor Philippa Lane has injured herself while feeding the birds on a slippery icey ground. She has a friend and fellow poet, who is using her site to post her poetry. Anyone who is interested in new poetry should take a look at 'Viola Swing' and 'April'. You will find them both under Philippa Lane as the author but they are actually written by Gemma Hooper. Please be encouraging and welcoming to Gemma when you leave your comments to this new member of PH.

  • Herbert Nehrlich1 (3/28/2005 5:31:00 AM) Post reply Stage

    They both do both.
    The Nazi Salute was designed to distract those birds. It is always easier to wash a sleeve than a whole uniform, brown or not.

  • Scarborough Gypsy (3/28/2005 5:23:00 AM) Post reply Stage

    There are both male and female birds.

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