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  • Rookie Ali Khorvash (8/21/2005 2:11:00 PM) Post reply | Read 1 reply
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    Hello every body.
    I have published my FIRST poem on poem hunter.
    its my first experience in writing a poem.
    would you please read it and tell your idea?
    its named: You are mine.
    thanks...
    Ali Khorvash

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    • Rookie Max Reif (8/21/2005 4:51:00 PM) Post reply

      Welcome, Ali! I see there are already 5 or 6 comments under your poem, I bet even more are on the way...

  • Rookie Michael Shepherd (8/21/2005 8:27:00 AM) Post reply | Read 4 replies

    OK guys, in keeping with the new code of conduct, I'm announcing the birth of a new poem. It came unannounced and interrupted lunch, and since it was 'oned' by some reader of discrimination within two minutes of posting, there's nothing you can say... I'm not even sure I'm its father, anyway...

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    • Rookie Raynette Eitel (8/21/2005 11:57:00 AM) Post reply

      Everyone ought to read this. It is contemporary, upbeat, and very very funny. Raynette

    • Rookie Max Reif (8/21/2005 10:20:00 AM) Post reply | Read 1 reply

      by the way, I think you might be able to vote many times...for other people's poems, of course, not your own. But we can always make 'deals'! ...

    • Rookie Max Reif (8/21/2005 10:06:00 AM) Post reply

      Maybe you should do the MUSIC next time & find a lyricist...JOKE! I've got ya up to 6.7. We can have a telethon to pull your sagging score up to the ceiling! Hell, up to the sky! I enjoyed the poe ... more

    • Rookie Max Reif (8/21/2005 9:51:00 AM) Post reply | Read 1 reply

      Michael, we're ALL one!

  • Rookie Michael Shepherd (8/21/2005 4:58:00 AM) Post reply | Read 4 replies

    I can get your poems, Herbert.I rather liked no.1116.

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    • Rookie Herbert Nehrlich1 (8/21/2005 5:40:00 AM) Post reply | Read 1 reply

      I just went to Complete Classic.com and all my poems are accessible there, the sites are related and very similar. So it really cannot be my computer, right? H

    • Rookie Herbert Nehrlich1 (8/21/2005 5:31:00 AM) Post reply

      I don't know which is number 1116 but thanks for saying so. I have also tried to access my poems through Google, all I get is a blank page. I vaguely remember Sandra Osborne having a similar problem s ... more


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  • Rookie Herbert Nehrlich1 (8/21/2005 1:59:00 AM) Post reply | Read 2 replies

    Is anyone having the same problem......no poems, just blank pages visible?
    H

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    • Rookie Raynette Eitel (8/21/2005 11:55:00 AM) Post reply

      Everything is coming through just fine for me. Some pages ought to be blank, however, but that's another subject. Raynette

    • Rookie Max Reif (8/21/2005 9:49:00 AM) Post reply

      Ah, the Blank Page Poems! There's a Chinese novel entitled MONKEY (it's in an English translation by Arthur Waley) , about someone who goes on a dangerous quest fo a sacred scripture that tells the ... more

  • Rookie Michael Shepherd (8/20/2005 6:52:00 AM) Post reply | Read 1 reply

    Background to Sophie Hannah from your inhouse sleuth: the Arts Council in GB has promoted since 1994, with 'arms-length' state funds and Andrew Motion's judgment,20 'New Generation' poets every so often, of whom Sophie Hannah is one of the three considered to be already 'well-known'. She tours abroad lecturing and reciting for the British Council, which is indirectly connected by personal contact and influence to the Arts Council. She is considered a sharp humourist in her verse. She has written two novels and children's books (she's a Dr Seuss fan) .
    You can download an Adobe pdf from poetrybooksonline with cvs and representative poems from the 20. I was bored and appalled at the lot, but perhaps it's sheer professional jealousy. Fellow Brits may know more; conspiracy theories flourish as you might expect.

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    • Rookie Richard George (8/20/2005 1:51:00 PM) Post reply

      I attended a poetry reading by Super Soph at the Festival Hall some years back and had the honour of her signature. She's a very clever iambic humourist, reminiscent at her best of Hilaire Belloc, but ... more

  • Rookie Gol Mcadam (8/20/2005 6:08:00 AM) Post reply | Read 1 reply

    Thanks for the comments on 'Norbert Dentressangle Van'. Don't know who said it - it's probably something I overheard in the pub (must stop eavesdropping) . I have only recently started with poetry and have a singular ignorance of what's what in the poetry world. I hope that joining PH might remedy this. Yes, I'm in UK and might come up with more daft queries before I'm finished: -)

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  • Rookie Poetry Snob (aka Jefferson Carter) (8/19/2005 7:58:00 PM) Post reply | Read 1 reply

    Gol, As we say in America, 'say what? ' This Hannah poem is the voice of 21st century poetry? Who told you that? Mr. Hannah? Well, maybe in UK it is (where are you from?) but it sounds more like the voice of early 20th century verse or specifically a flashy Stevie Smith. But well done. But not new in the least.
    I hope this isnt Englands (or wherevers) idea of the direction poetry SHOULD be heading. Snob

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  • Rookie Gol Mcadam (8/19/2005 1:36:00 PM) Post reply | Read 2 replies

    Does anyone feel they can comment on Sophie Hannah's 'The Norbert Dentressangle Van'? I know it has been hailed as a harbinger of 21st century poetry but wondered why. Thanks.

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    • Rookie Michael Shepherd (8/20/2005 7:29:00 AM) Post reply

      Further research suggests that the 'New Generation' poets tend to be performers of their own poetry - which means that a certain slackness in the language can be covered by the performance. It does su ... more

    • Rookie Michael Shepherd (8/19/2005 5:41:00 PM) Post reply

      Omygod she RHYMES... well that's put paid to any chance of fame in the US this last fifty years...oh she's made it to the PH 500 list years ago...yes but with what? a neatly turned standard 'bloody me ... more

  • Rookie - 150 Points Poetry Hound (8/18/2005 11:35:00 PM) Post reply | Read 4 replies

    The thing I admire most about Amberlee Carter's poetry is the seeming effortlessness of her original imagery. Sometimes I read a poem by someone and admire it although I think the images, while original, are ponderous or forced or too self-conscious. Amberlee's images fit right into the flow. They seem effortless

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    • Rookie - 150 Points Max Reif (8/19/2005 6:35:00 PM) Post reply

      I've enjoyed some of Amberlee's poems. I've found some stunning things in them. At least, they stunned me.

    • Rookie - 150 Points Gol Mcadam (8/19/2005 1:31:00 PM) Post reply

      Amberlee is a young person with a poetic turn of phrase. I agree with Michael, she could have the makings of a good poet but maturity will be the key here.

    • Rookie - 150 Points Michael Shepherd (8/19/2005 12:50:00 PM) Post reply

      I had stopped reading Amberlee, feeling that her poetry was all about Amberlee and love, and more for her own age-group to appreciate; but reading 'Swing-Sets' I feel that there's the making of a genu ... more

    • Rookie - 150 Points Poetry Hound (8/19/2005 11:58:00 AM) Post reply

      Well, that's interesting. I wasn't reall ... more

  • Rookie allan james saywell (8/18/2005 4:23:00 PM) Post reply

    WELL FORCED RHYME FOR ME IS WHEN MY MOTHER USED TO STAND OVER ME WITH A BIG STICK AND MAKE ME RECITE NURSERY RHYMES

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