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  • Rookie Michael Shepherd (11/5/2005 2:45:00 PM) Post reply | Read 1 reply
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    hey you anti-Condos: she is now rated as besotting males and females alike over here, official....why so different a view I wonder?

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    • Rookie Max Reif (11/5/2005 7:59:00 PM) Post reply

      ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? Are you talking about Condominiums? Condoleesa Rice? Condoms? (sorry, me dense, & keep myself uninformed lest something disturb my sleep.)

  • Rookie Max Renn (11/5/2005 12:43:00 PM) Post reply | Read 2 replies

    demonizing america is popular world wide

    I know what America is, I was there for a short time

    america is like two sides of a coin

    this poem is about good side of america...

    we know the bad side excesively....

    about weather, I meant satelite squences...

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    • Rookie Richard George (11/5/2005 2:01:00 PM) Post reply

      Good Americans are some of the best people in the world. I don't know how many of these are in the White House though...

    • Rookie Lori Boulard (11/5/2005 1:33:00 PM) Post reply

      Hasan, you are right on the money, and thanks for the clarification on the weather part. Truth is, every place has its beauty and ugliness, if you look for it. I for one appreciate seeing a bit of h ... more

  • Rookie Lori Boulard (11/5/2005 11:40:00 AM) Post reply | Read 7 replies

    You know, this America discussion makes me think. I posted something (remaining nameless) on the subject, and questioned its appropriateness to the point of deleting it, several times. That bothers me. Do you ever find yourself censoring your work - or at least hesitating - because it may be controversial?

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  • Rookie - 7 Points Max Reif (11/5/2005 11:00:00 AM) Post reply | Read 8 replies

    I found this an excellent poetic description of America. (Maybe someone could help me with the part about the weather, though.)

    by Hasan Ali Tokuqin

    Cheer up America!
    you are doing fine
    if you think otherwise

    you give world fanatsy
    you give world comedy

    you give world gospel Tv
    you give world vivid sex scenes

    you give world juciy hamburgers
    and sun like french fries
    other cool stuff

    you give world space shuttle take-offs and landings
    and breath taking landscapes from cosmos

    you give world
    the movement of clouds and weather

    you give fuel to the world's libido
    make her more sexy

    Cheer up America!
    you are cool
    you are doing fine.

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  • Rookie - 7 Points Max Reif (11/5/2005 10:50:00 AM) Post reply

    So, (just in from the PH news page) Paul McCartney's written a chidren's book too now.
    Wouldn't be surprised if it's good.

  • Rookie Michael Shepherd (11/5/2005 7:28:00 AM) Post reply | Read 3 replies

    Oh by the way, blush, squirm... I posted a poem, as one of the instigators after Max's suggestion, and, er, didn't think much of it, but, er, am getting rather fond of it, or, er, what it might have been...and, er, from us all really...um...to Mary and Todd... it's under 'One for..' in my homepage list...

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    • Rookie Lori Boulard (11/5/2005 9:00:00 AM) Post reply | Read 1 reply

      Michael, I'm so glad you mentioned this one here, as new postings fly in like lightning these days and I would have missed it otherwise. Really beautiful, and even more so that it's inspired by Mary ... more

    • Rookie Mary Nagy (11/5/2005 8:42:00 AM) Post reply

      By the way......yes, I vote for you to include this in the Christmas anthology! ! I could give up one of mine for it's inclusion. :)

    • Rookie Mary Nagy (11/5/2005 7:50:00 AM) Post reply

      Michael, I can't believe I missed this post! ! I just read it and so did my kids.......that is the most beautiful poem ever! (and I'm not just saying it because of the topic) This made me feel s ... more

  • Rookie Michael Shepherd (11/5/2005 6:41:00 AM) Post reply | Read 8 replies

    Marcy and I have both had the same thought: a (Christmas) anthology of say, three poems from each of the Forum Boyz'n'Gals made into a print-on-demand lulu-com book which would cost nothing but the time of someone adept. Marcy has offered a cover illustration.
    Is anyone with the appropriate skills prepared to take this on - and soon, if it's going to be Chrissieprezzie material?
    [We could ask one of our pals to select our three if we prefer...]

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  • Rookie Herbert Nehrlich1 (11/5/2005 2:04:00 AM) Post reply | Read 2 replies

    I just returned from a very enjoyable lunch with Jerry Hughes in Brisbane. He is up in what he calls Bjelkeland for a few days, visiting his son and he and I and a friend had a good oriental lunch, with Tiger beer (Singapore) in a sidewalk café at Southbank.
    Police description of Jerry:
    About 5'7 -5'8. Crew cut hair, well nourished Caucasian male not of the stated age of 74. Appears to be 64 (further checking and verification advised) . Height consistent with estimated weight, possibly a 4.2 kg excess abdominal fat.
    Earlobe crease bilaterally, dress casual Queensland, alert, pleasant looking, gentleman demeanour. Partial to beer, appetite is moderate in this situation.
    Photo obtained.

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    • Rookie Max Reif (11/5/2005 9:23:00 AM) Post reply

      You have apparently made your way to Australia. Did you tell us? How did I miss that? Is Brisbane a pretty city? I've imagined it is.

    • Rookie Mary Nagy (11/5/2005 6:04:00 AM) Post reply | Read 1 reply

      That must've been so nice Herbert! How lucky to actually meet eachother. Sincerely, mary

  • Rookie Herbert Nehrlich1 (11/4/2005 7:03:00 PM) Post reply | Read 1 reply

    I have just posted a poem dedicated to Sherrie. To be read after dinner.
    Sir H(jr)

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  • Rookie Allan James Saywell (11/4/2005 5:43:00 PM) Post reply

    Dont worry my little Sherie i still love you in a twisted sort of a way

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