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Rhythm and Rhyme Workshop


Workshop for poetry written in traditional forms.
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Emily Oldham Emily Oldham Female, 18, United Kingdom (9/10/2008 2:00:00 PM)

Hi could you comment on my poems 'Hell' and 'Do you believe? ' please, because I'd like to know whether it's worth entering them in a competion.
Comments on my other poems would obviously also be very nice. Thanks!
Athena :)

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  • Tulsi Hanumanthu (9/26/2008 2:33:00 AM) Post reply Stage

    Bravo Baby! Keep on writing and RISING! 46 poems at the age of 12, and each one a GEM! Unbelievable. I've read some of your poems and have given TEN points each.

  • Albert Wong (9/20/2008 10:35:00 PM) Post reply Stage

    O.K. I go to your site at once, you are a little kid? Who teaches you to write poems, your teacher or families. I'm going now.

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