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Robert Winthrop Male, 83, United States (5/6/2012 12:03:00 PM)

I wrote this song recently and my friend wrote the music. We gave it to a friend who is with the Grand Ol' Opry and we hope it will be recorded.


Aw! Somebody made you sad and blue.

Aw! Someone has made a fool of you.

Aw! Some thing he said was so unkind.

Aw! Sometimes he played tricks with your mind.

Aw! Somehow he got you off your track.

Aw! Some days you know he won’t come back.

Aw! Some way you’ll get back on your feet.

Aw! Sometime your life will be complete.

Though today the skies are gray and dark.

And you feel you’ll never find your mark,

Rise up tall and smile a great big smile.

Laugh, the sun will shine in just awhile.

Aw! Somewhere somebody waits for you.

Aw! Somebody’s heart is broken too.

Aw! Someone will come because he saw some

Awesome things in you. You’re awesome.

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  • Rookie - 251 Points Wala' Qamhieh (6/17/2012 5:57:00 AM) Post reply
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    GREAT Poem! ! ! ! ! :) Wonderful!

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