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Marilyn Hayne United States (7/13/2014 4:19:00 AM)

Cacaphony between the inside and outside
Mad hurricane, dizzying tornado
Comparing, contrasting, is this normal?
My audience is the mirror to this statement.
Too late?up to date.
Show and tell
every sight taste smell
Informed, deformed,
recurring haze
Concrete gaze,
I walk with my head low
they won't know
as much
about how fucked up I feel
all the time

Take a bow,
i'm doiing this for the free gift card
I am not a poet,
nor a prose writer
I am a snippet stomper
I made quips so sharp
theyll whip ur shit.
Cut me slack, it's 4 AM

This confetti of thought, exploded on you.
take it home with you.

And forget about it.

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  • Freshman - 1,353 Points Kay Staley (10/28/2014 9:45:00 AM) Post reply
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    So I liked this...arrogance in the words, nonformal sarcastic, unappreciatively disastrous: the small true glimpse of a subconscious mind.

  • Freshman - 1,391 Points Kevin Patrick (10/3/2014 10:44:00 PM) Post reply

    :) Just the last three lines get me, the rest is just the best. MORE!

  • Rookie - 20 Points Laura Torres (8/21/2014 4:52:00 PM) Post reply

    Nice confetti

  • Rookie - 20 Points Laura Torres (8/21/2014 4:52:00 PM) Post reply

    Nice confetti

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