(5/22/2010 3:52:00 PM)
The last poem I think it has potentail, as a reader I felt as if the poem was about two beings who knew of each other, but for some reason were not able to be with each other or see each other, and one of them is thinking about, or telling the other, what will happen when they do meet. You could use more expressions in your wording so that readers can know where you want emphasis to be placed. all and all it was a good poem.
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