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Ryan Mattock Male, 32, United Kingdom (3/11/2006 6:38:00 PM)

The Lost

Sitting in my room, thinking of the girl who doesn’t want me.
Feeling empty as a well with no water,
The most intriguing creature to walk the earth,
initially not my type at all.
For three whole weeks it took to love,
A girl so unique, most certainly sent from above!
A personality more than most,
The girl who has no love for me,
In my mind, now a ghost.

Ryan Mattock

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  • Mandy Faye (3/18/2006 4:42:00 PM) Post reply

    wow! there's a girl there for you in the world the right one
    don't worry you think you found her but god's telling you that
    she's taken there's more out there for you and it's not a ghost
    she maybe really close, to you and you don't even knwo it!

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