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Arabella Picken Arabella Picken Female, 19, United Kingdom (8/9/2013 7:13:00 PM)

Hello everyone.
My name is Arabella and I am a 16 year old, aspiring poet. Please could you take some time to view my poems and leave a comment.
I really appreciate any feedback; good or bad.
I'd love to be the best poet I can be.

The link to my poems is - http://www.poemhunter.com/arabella-picken/

Thanks in advance,

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    Poems on Indian Independence Day

    Today is Independence Day
    We are happy and gay
    Today we remember great souls
    Who sacrificed their lives for soil
    Who fought for freedom
    And attained martyrdom
    It is time to cherish
    The compassion and passion
    For mother India
    And march ahead for noble mission
    To keep country safe and secure
    Make our hearts pure
    And for sure
    And it's time to understand
    And steadily stand
    Against the foreign forces
    And internal disturbances
    We are Indian first and last
    No matter what is our caste and creed
    Faith and breed
    Service to nation comes first
    Arise awake and stay steadfast
    Be on the forefront and not behind
    Once again say ‘Jai Hind'

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